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Promise to Autumn
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Forget allergies {ha-CHOO!}; forget having to rake; for those of us who live in Jack Frost's domain, fall is hauntingly beautiful and oh-so short.
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Since talk was born, your child's heart has reveled
in awed descriptions tattooed with leaping flames
circling russet, lime and gold.  Neat or disheveled,
your painterly insistence on humongous gilt frames
and tipping your brushes with all of sun's colors
after rolling them drunkenly in pools of aged wine
leaves us with words that are so much duller
than the panoramas your patron insists you design.

Please pretend our words are pirouhetting leaves
that though destined to float to earth and perish
prove life is much more than labor and grief.
This is a dance meant to be cherished.

An artist friend spends hours tracing points and veins.
A child catches a gilt-dotted dancer for the tickle and shine.
Crackle underfoot turns out to be good for all kinds of pain.
Autumn, you harridan, I am making you mine!

 

(c) Phyllis Jean Green, November, 2004

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 Reviews of "Promise to Autumn"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 18, 2004
Such beauty as seen and revealed through the eyes of someone who knows what it is to cherish each and every God-given, grace-filled moment of life - and what it is to celebrate it in all it's fullness! You express the wisdom and wonderment of the child whose mind is a pure and limitless canvas of potential. TY for this sparkling creation - and for your most wonderful heart-warming comments on my pages. Bless you, Phyllis. TY Kate x

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo
Reviewed on November 17, 2004
Ah! Autumn ...and once again you have described my back yard.. and the rest of the world aroud me ..so beautifully done and so lovely ..thank you for the poem

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on November 17, 2004
Lovely work, especially the second stanza.
Poetically strong and easy to follow.

"rolling them drunkenly in pools of aged wine"
I like this line, it made me smile and laugh.

Take care



Reviewed on November 16, 2004
This was beautiful! Very lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 15, 2004
Beautiful Phylillis...thank goodnes i dont get the sneezes that easily.....lol!!

Keep warm okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 15, 2004
Fall is beautiful, but not long enough. And neither is winter. Bring on the snow and cold weather; I am SICK of rain!! GRRR!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Great write, Sweet Pea!


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