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Comeback!
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This is a slightly revised version of a poem that appeared in The Moonwort Review. I am planning on including it in my autobiographical poetry collections. Think it's wise? Thanks for being here! 'Pea'<3
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Comeback!


Shuffling into a summer night
softened by the curling petals
of ninetieth-year gardenias
who though grizzled and drooping
still know how to glow,
and an insistently tapping shower,
something in me shifts.
Perhaps, a breeze whispers,
life is worth it all.


When the first star parts the lace
knitted by maples leaning with age,
it illuminates a space in my heart
I had no idea was still available.
As rain begins falling for real,
so, at last, do my tears.


Not every sadness washes off
Well-meant words seldom penetrate.
But nature knows the wisdom of airing
and bathing our scars while leaving
growth that helps prevent wounds
from re-opening.



Breathing deep, I go back in,
steeled by a whisper from a ho-hum moon.
Sight and hearing are back
and the scent I have on is a knock-out.


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 Reviews of "Comeback!"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
"But nature knows the wisdom of airing
and bathing our scars while leaving
growth that helps prevent wounds
from re-opening."
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How astoundingly wise and cleverly put this is, Phyllis!
Thank you for introducing me to your pages.As MacArthur
said: "I shall return."



Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
Powerful images help to make this piece most effective. Thank you Phyllis. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Romantic Sad Good Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Beautiful poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
~~~~~excellent poem~~~~~
~~martin~~

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2004
I lvoe your usage of words in this write. Nicely done!

Reviewed on November 22, 2004
(((pea)))

yes, i like it--nay, i love it

most beautiful, and contgratulations on the book! :) i'm still waiting to be published, and here you are, another one! good on you! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed on November 22, 2004
BEAUTIFUL write, Sweet Pea; I LOVE it! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Kudos on your upcoming book! Congratz! :D

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2004
Love this one PEAPOD HUGS.
BEautiful poem.

LP


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