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Tapping Rain
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///// at last / / ///// // ///// //

                        Tapping Rain  
 
Rain finally edged east and out from under
the evil eyes drove it mad.  Made it do things
it wants to forget.   Choreographer, please.
I and the audience need the myth of tap.  
 
Slip your shoes under my eaves any time.
Tapdance soft-shoe like this.
No rattle, drum, metal.  Just whispering,
susurrating, Here now love  rain.
 
Barely October, meaning rain
does not force warm dress.  Water
just right.  Throw in a pinch of protein
to harden, cut acid, cut dirt, she is us.
 
Tapdance us back to the ocean now.
To where we swam in schools.  Where
dry was a dream.  Not a good one.
Dancer, why do you make us wait?
 
Never mind.  You are dancing now.
Not a single window complains.
All give in to liquid, go with  the flow.
Slip off this uncomfortable glass. . .yessss.

 
 


©) Phyllis Jean Green, October, 2005


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Reviewed by Hilding Lindquist (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
You write:

Never mind. You are dancing now.
Not a single window complains.
All give in to liquid, go with the flow.
Slip off this uncomfortable glass. . .yessss.


I agree, yes!

Good stuff,
Gus

Hilding "Gus" Lindquist

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
I love this song of a rain dance. The rain sang on the roof here today as well. Thank you for sharing this offering, Pea. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
wonderful talent..thanks..

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
As usual your talent shines in this write and echoes the sentiments of rain lovers throughout the ages. Yes even back to man's humble beginnings when he still had gills. Great write Phyllis

Felix

Reviewed on October 7, 2005

I am enjoying Your postings.

"Tapping Rain" is a magnificent composition.

Thank You for sharing Your Gifts.

Long Healthy Creative Life, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
First day of sunshine here in five days...but always a joy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
You made me yearn for the feel of it. I also like the line: "Not a single window complaints." Good pictures painted here.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
Beautifully said Pea, I too love the rain...

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
Not a single window complains!

The images and deligtful dreamy feelings this poems gives, are a warmth to the heart..

Reviewed on October 7, 2005
Wonderful write, Pea; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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