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Finish Satin
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November is punishing:  cold one day, hot the next.
Original rock and a hard place.
Then silk.   No other word.   Not coarse silk.
nothing knock-off, but silk from the best
silkworms best thread-spinners best dyers
best weavers best finishers.  Baby-fine best
silk.  Gossamer but spiderweb spined, kill-
to-feel silk warmed to please the most delicate
wrist, then ever so slowly, ever so gently
allowed to skim skin.   Fingered garment
masquerading as air caresses and tantalizes
until time stops and space stretches and rests.
Trees nod and begin to sway to the shhhhh
of silk from an unseen fall made special
Powder-puffs skiff overhead, but it is the silk
that goes to the head to the heart..  Scent
not perfume, not quite  not  that dizzies
yet sets things right.  Tomorrow slips up,
November will be up to its old  tricks
again.   Still feel silk.



©)  Phyllis Jean Green,  November 2005
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 Reviews of "Finish Satin"
Reviewed by Victoria Murray
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Fabulous Work Here! Loved It!!! Thanks for posting it!

Happy Holidays,
Victoria

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 28, 2005
Alluring work here, not just with imagery but also with alliteration/sound. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
The superb imagery enhances the "feeling" and the meaning of this poem. Thank you for sharing it, Pea. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2005
Beautiful and gentle poem.
Happy Thanksgiving!!
Tracey42xoox(c :)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on November 23, 2005
A masterpiece of seductive sensory images, Pea! Even as the silk-memories caress, they rebuke... November is sadness, and otherness and fading, as silk fades, when overworn. I, who rebuked silk, now yearn for its luxurious touch.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 23, 2005
Phyllis,

Very smoothe.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 23, 2005
Trees nod and begin to sway to the shhhhh
of silk from an unseen fall made special

Wonderful words and images, Phyllis.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2005
So perfect.. A divine poem..

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
perfect title. a poem you can touch. wonderful. Dawn

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
i have to agree ... the imagery is awesome!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
silky...great imagery

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
A silky soft scribe this one Pea...real smooth excellent.

Paul;-)

Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Pea,

Been seeing a lot of silk flying these days. Even though I abhor spiders, their webs are wonderous to behold. Excellent, beautiful write...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
excellent write and yes Really smooth and it's message is to me;
reminding of the real beauties among the constant nuisance of
life! great!
peace and holy blessings to you!
Rich CRISO

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Yes, the first winter snow does give a silky feel. nice job

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Some times it's cold, some times it's hot -- not just November and when it's hot there's silk "silk that goes to the head". This is one of the most sensual poems I've read in a long time. I didn't just read this poem, I felt it.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Beautiful description and thoughts.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
It is a poet's job to weave material to carry us through the seasons. The art of poetry lies within different ranges of each poet just like the snowshoe varies by frame shape and weave, each style of poem being particularly suited for that particular poet and the snowshoe being suited particularly to the terrain and type of snow.

The spiral of Finish Satin reminds me of a God's Eye by crossing two sticks and weaving the yarn from top to bottom and across the arm of the cross to take to the altar for the purpose of prayer.

Weaving is a magnificent and functional obsession that circles the globe. A Tibetan refugee woman weaver spins her wool on a wheel made of bicycle parts. The Amazonian woman weaves palm fronds to construct her living quarters. Pea Green weaves poetry from the finest silk making her the satin word QUeeN. So very fine, Pea, you have woven this piece into the likes of our common threads. I LOVE the warm feel of this! Thank you, my Rit and Rhinestone Gliterati friend.

Sage

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Gorgeous write with a smoooooooth touch!!

Par excellence!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Astonishing imagery. Here it is harmattan season. Dry, windy and harsh. Our own november.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
This is utterly gorgeous Pea! Nothing like silk, and the graphic is marvelous! Stunning design! You really sensualized this one;-) woo hoo! silk deserves it;-)

Love,
Eileen


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