A glance out a window reveals red and rust tines. Blast. Forgot to put away the rake again. Cloud eight or nine months along. Rake’s reputation more-or-less shot. –Moi’s? Puh-leez. Forget one more time, our gooses (geeses?) will hit the microwave. Just finish my coffee, then I will get right. . .Well, what do you know? Milady has come to call. Red sparks as she balances on a whisker- thin tine. I can feel the down settle on her va-va-voom breast. Electricity zzzt around her twig legs, splayed toes, raised beak, and sassy, upthrust tail. Satisfies herself that the coast is clear, sets off on another sail. Whisks through a sea of competing branches and the tattered remains of hangers-on. Don’t tell me she does not know she tacks better than Ahab. Breeze helps by staying behind. She knows, I know, that the oatmeal clouds and blue rags are November’s idea of a sky. Eyes that bright cannot miss. Why she builds the best nests and spots the best spots. Puts only so much trust in Milord.. She cleans, he cleans. Hatches, hatches, gathers, gathers, get it? Both see the good in a mailbox went south. Route tube or hanging basket housed a geranium. Engineer? No prob. Materials – twig, cardboard, root, moss, bit of string/whatever --may stretch three times her length. Just shrugs, picks ‘er up, gits ‘er done. Girl knows when to sing, when to blue the air! To be still is agony, but that’s what it takes, she’s there. See? See? She can teach a baby to fly. Knows how to let go. Knows to let Mother dress her in gray and dun so she’ll blend, yet stay every ounce her. Get tired, always make a rest- stop out of a sapling or some airhead’s rake.
Back again, Milady? Quick, everybody, come meet a class act. The original, the no-nonsense, the first lady tramp: Ms. Carolina Wren!
Great write with a nature lesson on Wren in such a lovely way.
Fee
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2006
Oh this is a wonderful poem for Debbie and Caylie............I love your work Phyllis so realistic and humerous witty and spry always a moment of poetic brilliance.
I love this, Pea! What a joyful poem -- I love the birds, too. Have several birdfeeders in my backyard by the screened porch where I watch them year-round. I adore your writing, my friend.
Love,
CJ
Regis
Mother Poet is probably smiling Her beautiful pearls to You, Poet,
"For a Perch, That Red Settee" is a Paean to Nature!
Long healthy creative life through a blissful living.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
peace and love, Carole
Fee
Happy ThanksGiving to you and Yours...
Joselyn
when to blue the air!
She's a very sharp girl - and gorgeous, too!
Love Tinka
Love,
CJ
I love the bedazzling and incredible imagery and effect, you always bring in your superlative writes..
And that is a wonderful picture of the " Jenny " Wren..
Keep trucking Pea
Love and Blessings
Peter