Special thanks to my wondrous friends, Karla Dorman and Karen Vidra, Bright and Shining Texas Stars. --- N: this piece is still in draft. . .after draft! Hope it makes some sense to some. . .
January Lurches Toward Spring -- Trial 2
High, but not too high to reach, contusions purple shadows that try to pry apart the bars of grey gnawn by moonlight-fashioned shanks and the clouded glares of inmates slated from birth to rot in cells and thought crooked as the calcium-poor molars and dogteeth that trickle their way, thanks to the thundering, plundering wardens of corruption and pettifogging politicoes fanned by tycoon-bought typhoons. Yet this is their sky, Yes, this is our sky, One that makes promises it may keep with a little help diverting the drones that churn the pressing ups and downs that scurl our flanks. Opposite, blood oranges unexpected breaks in fronts that have threatened eons. One cannot but be struck by the beauty. While it robs breath, it reboots mucked boots and spates of lightning shock with the knowledge that every moment we allow unjust Law to hail, that every time we swallow wind and rain whipped to fury by storm-happy rulers with Greed on their crests, that every moment we stare, mute and quivering at their trumpeting, elephantine ranks, ignoring the shades and shifts –– holes in its puffery! -- is worse than a waste. The greyer it gets, and the closer, the harder we must work to add color and light. Sweep away wars’ poisoned rubble, and give succor. See how hard the sun is working? We must do double. A streak of pink tinged gold has edged north. Carry the flag of peace through the breach, brave souls. Through the breach, brave souls, through the breach!
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, January, 2006
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Reviews of "Another January Lurches Toward Spring {Trial 2}"
To "carry the flag of peace" is a weighty honor.
Well done, Phillis. Will we ever know world peace in our lifetime?
Peace & Blessings to you & yours,
Carolyn
First of all, thank you for the dedication; I am honored.
Hope--life--comes in the Spring; let's hope our men and women come home soon, safe and unharmed! A powerfully thought provoking piece, done in usual Pea style; BRAVA!
Well done, Phillis. Will we ever know world peace in our lifetime?
Peace & Blessings to you & yours,
Carolyn
First of all, thank you for the dedication; I am honored.
Hope--life--comes in the Spring; let's hope our men and women come home soon, safe and unharmed! A powerfully thought provoking piece, done in usual Pea style; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla.
Love Tinka
brave souls. Through the breach, brave souls,
through the breach!
Love your ending, Phyllis.
Composition posted, message delivered... May many read and heedfully note "January Lurches Toward Spring".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU