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Sonnet {Check True or False}
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...ignoring my busted wing. . .


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Struggling up a steep drive, arms loaded with junk
masquerading as mail, I gave myself over
to false spring.  Caress of my invisible lover
flung envelopes, catalogs, fliers.  Nothing stuck
as I begged for the sensation of being melted
to oiled scent by a sneaked April’s second-skin kisses
just my temperature, no more.  For the bliss
of feeling I am known.  Me, myself,
the dirt, uncatalogued flower, not just flesh and bone.
More than the head connected to the neck,
to the breasts, to the stomach, the vagina, on down.
Rough start winds its way to warm silk net.
Spring comes in winter, color me there.
Slut in me crazy for your slippery air.


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 Reviews of "Sonnet {Check True or False}"
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Fun and compelling poem Pea!!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Oh... do I relate to this. Love the whole thing concept and words alike.

Carmen

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
I like the junk masquerading as mail-- Nice feeling of catching how that false spring makes you feel--

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
A nice work of thoughts
enjoyed this exceptional piece
of poetry...
enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
This is excellent, Phyllis! Great lines throughout.
Indeed, a master piece!

Thank you,
Love, Sheila


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Mesmerizing verses, Pea; this leaves me gasping for air (in a good way). Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2007
Enjoyed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Most outstanding...well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Absolute perfection, Pea...

smiles, Carole

Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Wonderful write, Pea!!!!! Great choice of words and paraded well!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Very well written poem. Stay off that slippery air.

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
I like your wording and the formation of them in the lines of this Sonnet write, and you dint go over in your lines excellent imagery and a very hot little number this page contains passion and some humor but with sensuality . This is fun to read and has a good flow.
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
This is a wonderful poem - rolls off the tongue to read.
Very sweet images. Thanks.

LL*

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Wow! Whew! Hmmm! What else can I say??? You've penned a master piece here my friend.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
hmmm.thoughtful write-i loved it

Reviewed on January 17, 2007
This is such a dear poem and I am so glad to always read your lovely work. True of course.

Reviewed on January 17, 2007
*whew*, (((Pea))),

This one is steaaaaming HOT! Just what I needed to read this cold, snowy winter's day in Texas........yes. Ab-so-LUTE-LY!!!! LOL at Fee's "hot flash" comment. :) I concur. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Great talking with you this AM

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Too hot, Pea this sounds like the cravings we all feel around this time of year, you put a whole new twist on the words "hot flash".

Fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Amazing write Pea. The imagery and insight, laced with the arcane humor makes this a positively perceptive experience. Kudos to you Poet!

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed on January 17, 2007

It doesn't matter the title one uses. What counts is the poetic wonder, which "Sonnet {Check True or False}" flows with plenty of it.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Sonnet {Check True or False}".

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
surprisingly nice. and the picture! did you do that??


Nothing stuck
as I begged for the sensation
the bliss
of feeling I am known.
myself,
the dirt, uncatalogued flower, not just flesh and bone.
Rough start winds its way to warm
Spring comes in winter, color me there.
Slut in me crazy for your slippery air.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Hilariously ingenious! Pea,
...you never cease to amaze me with your mind...I'm jealous! HA!
Take a bow...but don't slip!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~


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