An incontinent day, a day plagued by moods doomed to waffle as much as a 16-year-old told she can have a car if she will learn to drive stick. Sky sulks, wheedles, hides, shuffles out of its room, sobbing some made-up tale. So you turn. on a bunch of lights. Watch her unleash the full Monte: No, no, hers is a Huck Finn grin. Freckles practically pop. Gold gleams and a cattywampus wig vamps from mouse to robin’s egg blue with puffs of pale lavender talc. Please, night, bring her flowers and eau de toilette that dizzies with night-blooming jasmine.
Uh, oh. Rain is beginning to tap with acid-blunted nails. ‘s’all right.. Just a shower. Warm one, at that. Watch me fall back in love. After all, a rain shower, like a day, is not its own boss. It is Chaos that storms in and flings lemons like bolts. Clouds stuff themselves fat, then conspire with the dark spirits that are bent on shoving rivers over their banks and abusing wind so it, too, punishes. Only feels like a plot. Maybe night will calm the front. Always hope tomorrow will feel less frazzled.
"An incontinent day..."
Had to LOL here right from the start...I have had days like this...holding it back until I couldn't.
Right away I thought about how smart my 17 year old daughter is and how dumb she thinks I am! HA!
She thought that since she had to be at school early to make-up a lab, that it would be "easier" on me if she just spent the night at her boyfriends house so he could drive her instead! The mother and father were home, the sister has a spare bed...the whole nine yards was covered...so she thought!
But, She forgot the golden rule...no spending the night anywhere on a school night! Whew! got her on that one, I did! :)
Enjoyed your frazzle of life here Pea~ because it IS Life!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
"Sugaring Lemon" begins with a solemn mood that travels through a rhetoric darkness of woes but ends with hope---something we all strive for on those days of unexpected problems and moods. I enjoyed your poem.
Flows smoothly transporting the reader through the thoughts of the character within the poem...enjoyed! Always a pleasure to stop by and read your work!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Love the way this one drifts in and out of your thoughts creating a portfolio of images that makes one smile, remember, laugh and yea even love a little. Good job Phyllis
I love the way you write. You set the mood; you pen the poem with clever lines and imagery that makes the reader fall head over heels in love with your poetry! This is no exception. Yes. I LOVE THIS ONE!!!! BRAVA!
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Had to LOL here right from the start...I have had days like this...holding it back until I couldn't.
Right away I thought about how smart my 17 year old daughter is and how dumb she thinks I am! HA!
She thought that since she had to be at school early to make-up a lab, that it would be "easier" on me if she just spent the night at her boyfriends house so he could drive her instead! The mother and father were home, the sister has a spare bed...the whole nine yards was covered...so she thought!
But, She forgot the golden rule...no spending the night anywhere on a school night! Whew! got her on that one, I did! :)
Enjoyed your frazzle of life here Pea~ because it IS Life!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
and oh to be freckled again. lol Great write Pea.
Love Tinka
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Unique and intriguing, "Sugaring Lemon" strikes the dynamo of thoughts.
A true poetic task to stimulate the mind.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Excellent write; well done, my (((friend)))! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I love the way you write. You set the mood; you pen the poem with clever lines and imagery that makes the reader fall head over heels in love with your poetry! This is no exception. Yes. I LOVE THIS ONE!!!! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.