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Torn from a Tucked-Away Album
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               Torn from a Tucked-Away Album    
 
The wheel responding to your touch and our eyes meeting
between curves that could hairpin with little warning.  
between our awed takes on the tattered umbrella October
lowered over long stretches of the Blue Ridge Parkway.
She had dyed it red, gold, orange, and yellow, then tied
the leaf-woven cloth and dipped it with more abandon-
ment than care in copper, burnt umber, a bit of black,
and a cornucopia of greens that were weighted toward
the blue only certain evergreens can wear.. Fall’s woods-
smokey scent wended its way through vents and stirred
into a medley of leather, exhaust, and the musk of motel-
anticipating sex.  You reached to turn off  soft rock
so we could bridge the growing distance with chat,
but the sudden flesh of hills that rolled and dipped
to brown and black cattle ruminating on grass too green
to be real commanded attention, and another moment
we wouldn’t get back went out.  Beauty will trick you,
if you let it.  The perfume that yins and yangs under
a natural awning over a meandering two-lane designed
to slow.  Trick is not to let it get you so drunk, you
wind up at the bottom of a ravine.   Still, some mistakes
are too delicious to regret..  Like loving too much, too
soon, or too late.  Like all the above.   Like tripping
body and soul an entire week, only really seeing
colors and textures and possibilities.  Learning new trees
and cows and falls.  Moaning and sighing as one
up, down, and around silk hills and satin valleys
at night with the lights on.  Not just to reach a summit,
but for the journey.  Forget for once where it may end.
ride                                 baby                              ride.


 


                              (c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007


 
  
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 Reviews of "Torn from a Tucked-Away Album "
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Escape into the scenery and from reality. I vote for that and I don't want to think what I have to come back to either. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
A great write, you've taken us on a wonderful journey my friend with outstanding imagery...enjoyed this wise and beautiful write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
sucha "real" write-you have penned here-with many tidbits of wisdom to dwell on

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
Thank you for sharing this gift, Pea. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on June 4, 2007
(((Pea))),

You took us on a journey to last the ages! What imagery! What feeling! Well done, yes: I'd go again in a heartbeat!! INSTANT VACATION!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Sounds like a ballad to the old biker way. Very nice. Lady J

Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Loved the rhythm, roll, and images of this poem - excellent read!
Will savor again and again.

LL*

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Yeah, ride baby ride...two lanes intoxicate me also.
never enough love in this old world Pea.
Beautiful Piece!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Excellent poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Phyllis, this opens up a beautiful scenic trip down a road of beauty. I loved the vivid images and the sensual feeling.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Ride On!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
One of my favorite tshirts featured a motercycle engine superinposed on a skull with the caption Shut up an ride. This write brought it to mind for the imagery, sensuality and spirit of two seemingly reawakening souls travelling down a country road in fall is about as romantic as life gets.

Fee


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