...choke, sob. . . {{Tho't it was time for a little (semi-)comic relief ;)}
spinning {in a manner of - gasp- speaking)
. . .how wonderful that a machine can make us young again, ((((spin)))), ((((spin)))), ((((spin)))) . . .never mind about that not-being-able-to-walk-after thing ((((((spin)))))), ((((((spin)))))), ((((spin))) . . .so much fun, and to think it makes you strong again, (((spin))), ((spin)), ((spin)) . . .though you have to wonder if it is a waste of the little energy, puff, a person, puff, puff, puff ((spin)) . . .has left, and when enough is (spin) puff, enough!
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007
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Reviews of "spinning {in a manner of -gasp- speaking)"
Where is this machine?
if you are my friend you will shard your secret lol
if they invented a machine that would make us young
Again that inventor would be the riches person in the world!!
I'm getting stared on this project lol
Love this write!!
You my friend have a very Happy Thanksgiving Day!!
Morning Star
Carmen :-)
Be safe,
Karen
Carole~
Fee
if you are my friend you will shard your secret lol
if they invented a machine that would make us young
Again that inventor would be the riches person in the world!!
I'm getting stared on this project lol
Love this write!!
You my friend have a very Happy Thanksgiving Day!!
Morning Star
again
If that's true, you can make a fortune! How much for a spin??!!
Dang. By the title, I thought this was going to be about me, the StormSpinner! LOL
Now I'm dizzy...you put a new spin on things, that's for sure! Delightful, as Karen says. Indeed!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D *gasp, gasp, gasp!* LOL