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spinning {in a manner of -gasp- speaking)
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...choke, sob. . . {{Tho't it was time for a little (semi-)comic relief ;)}


         spinning {in a manner of - gasp- speaking)
 
 
. . .how wonderful that a machine can make us young
again,
((((spin)))), ((((spin)))), ((((spin))))
. . .never mind about that not-being-able-to-walk-after
thing
((((((spin)))))),  ((((((spin)))))),  ((((spin)))
. . .so much fun, and to think it makes you strong
again,
(((spin))), ((spin)), ((spin))
. . .though you have to wonder if it is a waste
of the little energy, puff, a person, puff, puff, puff
((spin))
. . .has left, and when enough is (spin) puff, enough!

 

                             (c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007
 

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 Reviews of "spinning {in a manner of -gasp- speaking)"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
lol. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
You got me laughing, sweet-pea!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 21, 2007
Very enlightening and joyous....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 21, 2007
Thanks for the morning giggles...

Carole~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 21, 2007
fun format ... conceptually charismatic ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
fun and clever write-

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
I don't know what this device is but it sure sounds like fun, at least until the puking part.

Fee

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Gave me a wonderful laugh! I truly got a kick out of this. I enjoyed it much!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
I think my grand mother would have called those first electric clothes washers one of those machines...cute write. Lady J

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Where is this machine?
if you are my friend you will shard your secret lol
if they invented a machine that would make us young
Again that inventor would be the riches person in the world!!
I'm getting stared on this project lol
Love this write!!
You my friend have a very Happy Thanksgiving Day!!
Morning Star

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
how wonderful that a machine can make us young
again

If that's true, you can make a fortune! How much for a spin??!!

Reviewed on November 20, 2007
(((Pea))),

Dang. By the title, I thought this was going to be about me, the StormSpinner! LOL

Now I'm dizzy...you put a new spin on things, that's for sure! Delightful, as Karen says. Indeed!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Delightful piece, Pea; you wore me out just reading this! LOL Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D *gasp, gasp, gasp!* LOL


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