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Shadow Play
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I love the shadows a dying day sketches.
Some are in ink and some are  in pencil,
but the ones I like best are suggested
with charcoal.  Smudges are creating
subtle movement.  By varying pressure
and thickness, our artist makes certain
small white lights surprise.   Some
shadows appear to have lace appliqued.
The effect is both primitive and avant
garde.  Just when I think I have them
figured out,  the shadows stretch to
cats getting ready to retire for the night.  
I come close to running off the road.
Ugly wires are now a shining copper
that brings out the blacks, grays, blues,
and browns in feline fur.  I almost keep
going when it's time to turn off.  When
I get home,  I tilt the window blinds
so every last bit of light and shadow
can come in and play
.

 

For my friends at Author's Den

(c) Phyllis Jean Green,  November, 2009

 

 


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 Reviews of "Shadow Play"
Reviewed by Brenda Dobson
Reviewed on January 22, 2010
Enjoyed this poem's imagery...as the shadows move about, so telling.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 14, 2009
A lovely rendition of the gloaming of the day, Pea. Thank you. Love and blessings,

Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
Skillfully executed, a thing of beauty. Also noticed wonderful use of line endings.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
Agreed Pea...very unique and very playful...I love the reference to the cats.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
This is unique and playful. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
I too, love the smudges. Excellent images.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
AS THE SUN RETIRES..NIGHT AWAKENS AND A CONCLAVE OF HIDDEN IMAGES ARISE...TOUCHING AND INSPIRING THE ALERT ARTISTIC MIND. FANTASTIC WORK...SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
Marvelous. You bring anthropomorphic details into natural existence.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
Stimulating imagination at work in these lines.
Lasting images.

Axilea

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
This is the time of day when light becomes the electric impulses that spark that part of our brain that houses our imagination. How wonderfully you have taken that plain sketchpad and beckoned those last moments of beauty to play upon it. Stunningly beautiful work, Pea.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
wonderful sketch...encompassing all the shades of life.best wishes.neerja

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Look at you!! An artist at her easel! This is beautiful abd I see it all from your words. You paint s wonderous canvas.

Susan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Pea,
For the rest of us, it's difficult to write this well, the control not only of the imagery but of the feeling, the unsaid as poignant as the expressed, and as ever the effortless fluency of mind and phrase.

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
As usual Phyllis you give us great reading with your chosen words.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Love and enjoyed this one as you bring such life to something that most artists and photograhphers value so much and yes I think we as poets do as well.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
imagery vast and quick to delight the mind thanks good work

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
This shows the breath of your poetic mastery.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
An amazing display of creativity is within the parameters of this wonderful mixture of reality and shadowy mystery.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
a lovely and peaceful write

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Pea this is great, you brought this art of dancing shadows right to us...great work!
Love,Christine

Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Only an artist could write like this, painting the visuals on our eyes ... simply GORGEOUS, (((Pea))). One of your (many) bests. Take a bow, you've earned it with this one!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Light always will be a bad teacher to shadows.

Georg


Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Wow! Like a charcoal drawing, only in words. I love it!


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