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Great Taste, Autumn Show Critics Concede
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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Summer was so hot, the little rain that risked
venturing our way turned to steam that hinted
of scurrying squirrels and campus bonfires, then
turned and sneaked back to the sky to impregnate
new clouds.  Short  on water, leaves shriveled to
misshapen fans that get hurt easily.  Breezes 
stay busy unpinning them from branches so they
can watch them tack like paper boats to the sea
of voyeurs waiting to trash November’s designs.

The rich cherry and jalapeno reds and sweet-pepper
yellows of last year’s extravaganza have given
way to thumbed tomatoes and bruised and
spotted oranges.   (Eggplant and potato-peel?
Really, dahling.)   Squinting, I spy the odd
model in last season’s va-va-voom hues totter
away from a table,  claiming to have gotten full
on a sprig of sun-browned greenery.  So thin,
the holly and pyracantha centerpieces hide them.
Seurat would have loved the polka-dot berries. 

Toward dusk, volunteers throw open the doors
and windows so we can watch plums, peaches,
and apricots  transform the lawn into a combination
Oriental carpet and Jacob’s coat of many colors.
Sky’s still so blue, you’d think October was allowed
to remain in charge.  Clouds white as untrammeled
snow peak like the meringue only a dedicated chef
can whisk.   Ahhhhhhh.  Soon be time for apple cider 
and gingerbread men with raisin eyes and grins
and M&M bow-ties.  Though weather readers
promise higher highs before winter creeps in, better
snap it up.  Already heard a “ho-hum yesterday.”

A persimmon leaf is drifting my way.  Not a spot
on it.  Cupping a hand, I catch it.  Looks good
enough to eat, but if I can find more, I believe
I will take them home and arrange a private show.
Lunch will have to be a la carte and the affair
won’t be anything next to Nature’s, but my poet
friends and I will use any excuse to ooh and ah.
Leave  greenery to sylphs.  We’re piggin’ out!


 

 

                 
                    (c)  Phyllis Jean Green, 2010

                            All Rights Reserved

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Great Taste, Autumn Show Critics Concede"
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
You must have been in my back yard, because it was A Great Taste, Autumn Show Critics Concede -- and I've got the pictures to prove it. You just added the color, in beautiful words -- thank you, (((Pea))).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Onomatopoeia for the eyes. Patrick

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
mmmmmmmmmmmm, delishish

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 17, 2010
Your poetry paints scrumptious visuals Pea...lovely writing

Carole~

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on November 16, 2010
Love the photo Pea. But soon, very soon, all that you write about here will be a memory until next fall when it happens all over again. Don't you wish life was like the leaf, dying in the fall only to be reborn in the spring? The images here are as bright as the hues of fall, and just cool. Thank you for sharing the wonderful write.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 14, 2010
Those concords reminded me of a house-office I had with a fallow grape arbor. That year was a bumper crop and we filled paper bags with them to carry 700 miles because we couldn't eat them all. Concords were too bitter and only good for Mogen David--I thought. But those were so sweet they burst in your mouth like candy.

Thanks for the lush rendering of copious harvest I so miss.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 13, 2010
your visuals are luscious tasty and cook nicely in my mind cells ...

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 13, 2010
Phyllis,
I love the colors and visuals in this poem. My fave description was the one about the meringue clouds. Well done. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 12, 2010
Pea,
How you see links between often apparently unconnected objects and moments and forge them uniquely is one of the qualities I admire in your thinking and writing, just one of the many qualities; here, is that usual fluency, a sharp wit, that great sense of being in touch and an underlying wisdom.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 12, 2010
What a colorful feast..this is great Pea :)
Love
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 12, 2010
So funny! Your imaginative range is glorious, rich and charming!
Enjoy!
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 12, 2010
this is beautiful and creative!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 12, 2010
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on November 12, 2010
I pray you enjoy your feast, Phyllis. This beautiful writing was a feast for me.

Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Lola Nation (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2010
This was a fun read.


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