Hope you enjoy this. I certainly enjoyed writing it. . .about a hundred times. Not sure it is ready, but I need to let it go. For now, anyway.
Bless you for stopping by. Pea <3
Tripping in 3-D {from Color me Alive}
Driving home from the Smokies – ahhhh, the Blue Ridge –, I signal gilded yellow, emerald and forest never to pass. In the rearview, see them flicking lights, to show they feel they are equal to the chutzpah of the mountain ash I saw flaunting persimmon. "Wait," I hear one honk. "Drive slow or you will forget to save the one-time-only images we hand out. No need to stare. Just unpack and cherish. Remember, we are open twenty-four seven ‘case you need a lift. Take your pick of a spring bouquet or an original collage in the red family by internationally-famous artist, Jack Frost. Winter will see us offering branches gracefully sculpted in ice. Like for rain to silver, no extra charge. With nature’s wonders at beck and call, name the prescription and it is yours. Perhaps dark lace woven of evergreens backed by rose will help, or black-eyed susans waving from a pasture rich with brown and white cattle that are grazing under oak parasols, as Sol peeks timidly between clouds to see what lightning left. Understand you baby our cousins at home. Even an ornery cactus or two. Why we voted you in| our club. Rule Two: always take the scenic route to bypass worry. Rule One: leave our beauty untrammeled. Rule down the list: seek the aged lavender and baby pink of uncrowded twilights and add deep-purpling peaks, then get up at dawn and check out the east. Never fear that if you leave us as you found us, we will neglect to apply our balm. For us, you see, the task is simple. Like these lines.
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, February, 2004
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Reviews of "Tripping in 3-D {from Color me Alive}"
Terrific depiction, takes me there, tripping too, with you.
A kindred spirit, wonderful to know one who sees, feels, as I do about such awesome beauty.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Excellent poetry to follow...
HI Illini....
SMILES
LADY PEG
Wonderful lines here and terrific imagery. Can feel the breathtaking beauty and smell the air. Love this. Thank you!
Hugssssssssss!
Tami
A kindred spirit, wonderful to know one who sees, feels, as I do about such awesome beauty.