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Who Do You Think You Are ( Dedicated to Nicole L Vergara's daughter Gabriella)
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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Nikki, your poem about the child predator touched me very much. I hope you don't mind my reply to your poem.

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Who do you think you are
Is it power that you seek
Showing yourself to little kids
So young and meek
Go and leave us alone
We don't need you kind
Stealing our innocence
With your evil mind


Who do you think you are
I just can't comprehend
How could anyone commit
Such a terrible sin
I still play with my dollies
I watch cartoons on my TV
My little mind don't understand
Things you wanted me to see


Who do you think you are
Your'e disgusting and vile
Put yourself in my place
For just a little while
I play jump rope with my friends
My hero is spider man
I'm just a little kid
Why can't you understand


Who do you think you are....

(c) Linda Hill 2004


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 Reviews of "Who Do You Think You Are ( Dedicated to Nicole L Vergara's daughter Gabriella)"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
Superb write! This should go out to
allo agencies for abused kids! Tell them
how the injured feel! If I ever see him, ******
At least he is safe in prison!!!!!!
Excellent poem Linda,I am saving this one!

Becca

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2004
Right on

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2004
OH THANK YOU LINDA FROM ALL OF US!!!!
This is such a wonderful, powerful dedication and truth and it touches me so deeply much!
You will be happy to know that this predator is NOW in prison. He turned himself in and when he did and they ran his name they found out he had TWO parole violations! So those topped with what he did to my little girl and the other children should be enough to lock him away for a VERY long time...YEA!!!! I'm going to post a Blog today/tonight going into further detail for all as this although has taken a turn for the better the news did get worse before it got better!
((((Hugs and Much Love))))
~Nikki, Gabriella, Mariano and Baby (Dimitri)~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
A powerful write, Linda.

Reviewed on May 27, 2004
great poem in relation Linda but those type people only care about their desires. l&p G

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 27, 2004
It's a scary world for us parents, but it always has been.
Great write Linda.
John

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Wow, this is right on target. I cannot believe there are people so sick int his world that they do such things, and that it seems so much more prevalent now. Great write that draws attention to this subject.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Excellently Done__

I Hope Niki Sees SOB ( Any Pervert)Shot Him Right Between His Legs,i.e Let's RID THIS HOLY HELL WORLD OF PERVERTS_CHILD MOLESTOR'S NOW!!

Your Friend TRASK

Reviewed on May 25, 2004
(((linda)))

heartbreaking, what these perverts do--powerful and in your face--thank you for speaking for many

i wouldn't be so nice :( castration's too easy for 'em

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed on May 25, 2004
makes me sick to think that these perverts are about, preying on our innocent children. now that i know a child who has been molested, i feel especially troubled. NO child deserves to be treated in such a despicable, deplorable way!

excellent write, and (((HUGS))) to you, ((((HUGS)))) to little gabriella, and (((((HUGS))))) to mommy nicole! prayers for them, too!

love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :( >tears, tears, tears <

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
linda Powerful there are no excuses right.
And Some dont get it...
Powerful.

Peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Every one said it already!!

Most outstanding work Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Linda, this is a great write that shows the sickness of this mans soul, I have no mercy or tolerance for these kind of acts. Your piece is excellent,
Allen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Can't be repeated enough. Great write

Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Linda
A little girl came up missing this evening in our neighborhood and the thoughts of all that could happen raised through my head, thankfully she was found unharmed, which was a blessing to us all, but I admire what you do in the words you write...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Salutations Author-Poet Linda Hill.

Greetings to All.

First of all allow me to express my outrage at the SOB who did what he did !!! Now that I got that off my chest, I still do not feel any better, however, since you are OUR Angel of mercy for the children and the abused, I’d like to thank you for this tremendous write, and I will contain my disgust regarding what happened to Poet’s Nicole Vergara’s daughter, and the other six children, and God knows how many other who this sleaze ball has robbed of their innocence to just this.

I wrote “One Silver Bullet” because of my own personal outrage at a system where we continue to allow these types of animals to roam our streets, without a leash wrapped around their throats!!! It is one thing to attack an Adult and cause the damage, I have seen and also I’ve written about, but, it is a whole other issue to do any harm to children. The cycle must be broken NOW!!! WAKE UP AMERICA AND PUT THESE ANIMALS ON AN ISLAND AND BLEW IT OFF THE FACE OF THE GLOBE!!!!!!

May the good Lord always keep you and yours, and all the real human beings on OUR planet safe from the Predators roaming this globe!

My deepest gratitude, respect and admiration.

Thomas Lanechanger

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Great write.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
BRAVO!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Well said, Linda, on behalf of Nikki's precious daughter, and everyone else's dear child.


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