You bought me a rose -placed it in my hand-
With a tear in your eye - I didn't understand.
You said you were leaving me - time to move on-
I had no clue you felt this way- I should have known.
You gave me this rose as a token of all we shared-
Darling , I wish you knew just how much I cared.
You say I did nothing wrong - you want to be free-
Did you ever think how this would effect ME?
How can I face life knowing you are gone?
How can I walk in at nite to an empty home?
I've given you so many years - how blind can I be?
I never had a clue that you were'nt happy.
Tear's are flowing...honey, what did I do?
How can you tell me that we are through?
I'm searching for just the right words to say -
As you kiss me and slowly walk away....
I was struck by the surprise as well as the pain. Sorry about the lack of communication.
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2002
Wow .. wonderful my dear friend .. this is really so wonedrful ... reading this i really felt ..for whom did u write this for .. who is that lucky person in ur heart .. Can that man leave u alone .. u are so wonderful person .. u are so kind a person .. how can that person leave you .. If u wrote this for someone in heart and if this words came from the true heart .. Let me tell u my dear friend ... Keep loving him ... and ... dont cheat him .. I am sure he will return back to u ...
I will surely pray to god for him to return back to u .. hope he will be back to u sooon ... Will always pary for that ... Wonderful write .. Keep always writing and Keep always smiling ... Pls dont Let the rose CRY .... Its too bad in LOVE ...
Linda, this is so sad. I hope this is just a poem well-written!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
P.S. Some men always threaten to leave, but they never do. In my eyes, they're even worse.
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2002
Great write Linda,
How sad but true that love can wither into nuthingness. How we once couldn't breath without our mate and hung on their every word. Dwindles into mindless prattle and hardly noticing they are around. Good capture of this sensation.
Drkman
absolutely powerful, as your poems so often are! keep up the super job, linda! love, and ((HUGS)), your friend, karen lynn. and christ's blessings to you, too!
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I will surely pray to god for him to return back to u .. hope he will be back to u sooon ... Will always pary for that ... Wonderful write .. Keep always writing and Keep always smiling ... Pls dont Let the rose CRY .... Its too bad in LOVE ...
Wish u all the best :D ....
(f) for u ...
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
P.S. Some men always threaten to leave, but they never do. In my eyes, they're even worse.
How sad but true that love can wither into nuthingness. How we once couldn't breath without our mate and hung on their every word. Dwindles into mindless prattle and hardly noticing they are around. Good capture of this sensation.
Drkman
thank you