Silence of the Night (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2002

Linda. This is incredible. What power you diplay wehn you reach deep within and expose the turmoil. I loved it.
Drkman

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

Too painful to even read, Linda, touched me so deeply. This is outstanding work.

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

this is so achingly...beautiful...so much pain felt, though...god, want to...just so real and..the pain, yes, it's there, two can be the loneliest of...Oh, you just bared so much here...the beauty/that is in the writing...sharing..yes, you've touched..God, this hurts...((((linda)))) many 10++++++
i believe you spoke with rare openness for many, yes?

Reviewed by Cles Wilson

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

WoooW. This poem blew me away. Beautifully written.

Reviewed by Jane Flowers (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

Sheesh - this is a brilliant poem. So deep -sad and too often true.

Reviewed by Donald Balsley (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

I think your words expressed the feelings of a great many people. Excellent..Don

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

stunning piece, linda, as always; i enjoy your work, and i enjoy your talents!! love, and ((HUGS)), your friend, karen lynn. god bless you, too!!!!

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

Oh Linda
you can tuck me under your pillow so when Mr cold ignores you i will be your toy.

they say real loneliness is not being by yourself it is when someone is inches away and you are still alone.
you really captured the emotion here
great job

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

This touched to close but its a great write! You captured the mood and feelings perfectly.

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

Too many nights of being together - yet alone-
Lost in the shadows - the clock ticks on.
Yearning...needing...to feel just a touch -
But I guess that is asking way too much.

These lines remind me of my life with my first wife. Sometimes you can not bridge the silence. Very well written! The pain and longing for yesterday shines through. Tim

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

If he's there and you have the desire, make contact. Grab those words and say them. Could it be worse? This was beautifully written with a real knowledge of this pain. Well done. katy.

Reviewed by Margo Maris

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

Linda, my heart goes out to you. The only thing I ever wanted out of life was to feel cherished. I didn't get that in my marriage. When I found someone whom I thought cherished me more than life itself, I was overjoyed. Unfortunately, he recently left me, so the grass is never really greener.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

Hello Linda ... My Dear Friend ... wonderful write ... Dont know what you have metioned is about you or not ... Or if this is just a poem as u always say ... Well i would like to tell you something. Life is not a game. Life is not made up of desire for flesh ... there is something above that ... Try to understand the person in the bed near u ... Try to look at that person and look at his eyes ... you can see the trueness of love and care for you in his eyes ... Try to understand that and be a wonderful supporter of life both for him and for you ... I know you well ... you will surely understand the reality of life once ...

Wish you all happiness friend ... Some may ask you to leave him ... Leaving one person is to easy ... but to find a true love is so tough ...

Keep smiling and take care friend ...
You will surely find happiness once ...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

This is such a painful write... but well expressed...
Jenni

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

Linda,
Soulfully expressed. I've been there.

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

to know is more than half the battle...very good,i feel it.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

chilling
great job

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

Beautiful sorrow...

Jo

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

The emptiness is a killer...With this you have expressed the feelings of so many. Do not let this hold you back..

Your Friend,

The Voice

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

God I have been there in my marriage.. it wasn't a good place to be. I can feel the emotions in this hun...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

This one is real. Hope it isn't for you. It's just how I feel.

Ron

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

I could feel the tension there and that cold silence made me shivver....if it isn't fiction get out as soon as possible life is too short to stay anywhere without love and passion...
this was an excellent poem.