Empty Hearts (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 3, 2002

So many good coments allready,whatever I say will be inadequate but this is one of the most emotional poems I've read for a long time. It's always sad when loves dies. Been there,done that.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2002

No, Linda, he did not take your dignity, for that is in evidence throughout this very painful write. I hear a note of survival as well. A "modern home" may house a ramshackle heart, but YOUR heart is very obviously intact in an emotionally and well-written poem. Youve said it well, Linda. Take care. katy.

Reviewed by Sanilnath

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

Sanil ... Will always fight against that .. bcoz i hate it ... ha ha ha :D u know that sanil will figth with you when u say u are alone ... Will surely fight with you ...Bcoz according to me all individual have someone in the heart .. can never be alone .. if u think ... Ha ha ha ;) ... I hate ... I hate ...

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Sanil...sometimes you can have
everyone near you and still
be so totally alone.

Reviewed by Cles Wilson

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

This was very powerful...so true...the raw honesty pours out. I will be back to read more!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

You are strong,
keep writing

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

it may be sad, but it is a most excellent write full of passion

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Wonderful write ... my dear friend ... you really have a wonderful imagination too ... keep it up ... Feel so sad bcoz i get to read just your Repost all the time ... Eventhough all you writes are wonderful ...

i would love to say one thing ...

HEARTS ARE NEVER EMPTY THERE WILL BE SOMEONE ALWAYS IN IT TO THINK OFF ... STOP THINKING and SCREAMING THAT YOU ARE ALONE WHEN YOU HAVE EVERYONE NEAR YOU ...

MOST IMPORTANT THING ... FIRST UNDERSTAND THE REALITY OF LIFE ...

This is really a marvellous write ...
Keep smiling and take care ....

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Linda, Life is like that. We gotta take it, like it or not. But the writting is beautiful though so very painful.

Joel

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

this is so sad, linda! hope it is fiction, and if it is not, i hope things get better for you!! such a powerful, emotionally charged write!!

Reviewed by Mitzi

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

I enjoyed the real feelings here...sad and hurtful as maybe...it makes one stronger

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

sad beyond words. I hope its fiction. If not, then good riddence to him, you deserve better. What a wonderful talent for poetry you have.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

So very deeply moving Linda,,,but so very sad as well,,,Great write,,horrid thought,,,Lisa

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Linda, this is so heartfelt. My first marriage ended this way only I was the one left behind. God Bless you and I will keep you in my prayers. Tim

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Touches too deep to really give a review words. Pain too real and too well understood. "One man's trash, another man's treasure"

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

So very sad....this is a terrible place to be....I hope this is just fiction...You have such talent....
Jenni