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I Won't Feel...
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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You are good for nothing
Just sitting around 
You'll never amount to anything 
You little clown
You are just trash
No one to brag about
Get up, you Dummy
Don't just sit there
And pout

 
Daddy, why can't you look
hard and see
The damage you are doing
The hurt you cause me.
You make me feel like I'm
Only 2 inches tall
No self esteem ,no
Dignity at all.


Can't you do anything right?
A wimp is all you are
You are just an idiot
You'll never go far.
Stop whining stupid , act
Your age
You don't want to get
Me in a rage.


Daddy, I simply won't feel
I'll shut my heart down.
When you curse and yell at
Me, I won't hear a sound.
I'll build a wall inside myself that
You can't break through
Your words won't ever hurt me
No matter what you do.


I simply won't feel.........
I simply won't feel.........

© Linda Hill
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 Reviews of "I Won't Feel..."
Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on August 28, 2010
Awesome portrayal of such common abuse. This really touches my heart and reminds me of some of my earlier writings.

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on May 2, 2010
This poem make me want to cry but many parents need to hear and read your message because they might save their child. Every creature of God is great because God says so, and so it is! Words spoken and food eating are alike both are taking in or consunumed by our bodies. So we must be careful how we use words and what we eat. Peace!!! Sister Linda this is profound, thank you, thank God for you being an advocate for the children.

Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on April 25, 2010
Well written Linda, it brought back some childhood memories that I would rather forget. Very powerful. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 25, 2010
We often wonder why some seem to have no feelings at all, here is a great example Linda, You can only hurt one so much, what a shame that they can't get what they NEED from the ones they are suppose to turn to and look up to and trust all through their lives. Great write Linda that brings tears to my eyes.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Yes, this brought back memories, Linda. I don't miss those days. This is brilliantly written. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Linda ~

A tear, a shiver and my breath taken...a sad, but truest of too many stories... We all need to support our children. STOP THE VIOLENCE

Thank you, and Be Well, Carin' Spirit

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
AN ABSOLUTE GEM...THIS STRONG WORK IS A KEEPER. WE ALL NEED TO BE REMINDED THAT WHAT COMES OUT OUR 'THOUGHTLESS' MOUTHS...HURTS AND DOES SO MUCH DAMAGE...FOR A LONG, LONG TIME. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Hi Linda, Emotional abuse is hard on everyone, particular the children. Hopefully adults reading your outstanding piece will realize this.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Hits to the heart of a loving parent like a sledgehammer hits rock on a chain gang. Sadly the abuse goes on...it is time the world passed the "0 Tolerence" laws that schools now use to curb bullies. Any parent or abuser found guilty of this type of crime should face wilderness abandonment for a period of time appropriate to the crime.
fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
A great message in this write, Linda. One that I pray many will heed. Well done.


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