Mommy..... (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Deart heart, it is so good that you can express love and concern for others the way you do. I am so proud of your accomplishments at AD; especially as expressed here. You must have a heart that loves evryone. Thank you my darling for your comments on my work. I deeply appreciate them. No wonder there is so much love in my heart for you. Bill

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

This is a good write. There are childrens who miss their parents. They long for parents love. But the world we live in has become too modern that most parents are just bothered untill they give birth. After that what happens and why somany childrens lose care and affection from parents .. nobody think of that. What you have mentioned in this write is one of the example we face bcoz of modernisation of culture ... Modernisation for thought ... Every one ... each and every one are running behind modernisation. Sometimes in that fast life we miss a lot things... Dont even bother what we lost.

This was a wonderful write ....

~Sanil
http://www.sanilnath.cjb.net

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

*tears* well written, haunting...but sadly, oh, so true...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Reality can be cruel and heart breaking sometimes. My heart goes out to all those children that helplessly end up in situations like this.
Very good written.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

it's a shame how some parents treat their children; they'd rather be doing something else instead of taking care of their little ones. sad, really. a sad, heartbreaking write! thanks for sharing! love, your friend, karen lynn.((((HUGS)))) :( and then people wonder why so many children act the way they do; no parental love or support. tragic!

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Such a powerful sad write...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

superb voice for the neglected...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Wow!! This is so powerful!!!! The unheard cries of a neglected baby...so well told..
You have done it again, Linda... I salute you, my friend!!
Jenni

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Linda...This is very emotional write...well written...ure a wondeful writer...realistic write...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Heartfelt write... what a crime to ignore a child...depression..is an illness that most are blind too.. God bless the child, so he may surive.

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Linda
Once again you tap into your readers mind and inplant an image for them to carry with them and ponder for the rest of the day.
Drkman

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Another Great write Linda!
Jack

Reviewed by Peter sprenkeler (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

Nice one L....as usual.
Yes I am back...still love your work, and your heart....Pete!

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

Beautiful sad and yes a reality that happens too often

Reviewed by Red Matrix (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

If toddlers could talk...

Kind One, This poem makes me love my 'mommy' a whole lot more because of who she is, but more especially of what she was to me.

�� Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

Wow i am impressed with the weight of emotion ... Well done!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

A BEAUTIFUL EMOTIONAL WRITE, BUT AS WE KNOW TOO WELL, THIS IS AN UNWANTED REALITY IN THIS WORLD

WILLIAM