Mama.
I came today to have a talk with you
I feel down, just dont know what to do
Some days theres such sadness I feel
And when I do smile, it don't seem real
Emptiness makes its way down to my soul
Depression has such a powerful hold
Tears come down , don't even know why
These days it seems all I do is cry
Mama.
Did you ever feel life was going fast
That nothing was ever meant to last
Walls around my heart so cold they stand
No one seems to understand
Darkness swirls around me like a cloud
The echos of silence ring so loud
Tears flow down, can't stop the pain
Sometimes it feels I'm going insane
Mama.
Thanks for listening. I have to go
Its cold and its starting to snow
I place these roses on your grave
Minus one tear stained petal I want to save...
Beautiful. I feel your pain and hurt. I found this because I too wrote a poem named "Mama." I love the picture you used. Healing over time happens, but we'll always miss the one who understood us best.
Linda,
I now share the quote on my bio page... I deem fitting," If you show them your heart, all men of value shall embrace it"
and many shall embrace yours!
Rodney evan Bohen
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
Your poem is ready my dearest and posted on the main page. Love you. Bill
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
I am speechless
what a beautiful tribute
May you be blessed as you bless everyone with your writing
Wonderul write Linda, an real tear jerker. Mama was a very pretty lady.
Jack
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
well written
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
this was so sad and so heartwrenching I hope you can get a smile sometime soon you are such a sweet person
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
Hope you are feeling better now, Linda. When you are down the best way is to get it out of your system.
Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
Touching poem. I hope you found comfort.
~E
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
Oh Linda,
"Mama.
Thanks for listening. I have to go
Its cold and its starting to snow
I place these roses on your grave
Minus one tear stained petal I want to save... "
This one Deeply touched me
Peg
So sad... I am sure you Mom hears you and wants to wipe your tears away.. I am sure she watches you.. and helps you. This one broke my heart. She is with you.. just feel her.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
My heart is moved, as well,
by this lovely tribute...
Know that kind of grief, too...
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I now share the quote on my bio page... I deem fitting," If you show them your heart, all men of value shall embrace it"
and many shall embrace yours!
Rodney evan Bohen
what a beautiful tribute
May you be blessed as you bless everyone with your writing
Sandie Angel :o)
Touching, heartfelt moments, beautifully written.
Nancy
Amor
Excellent If Only Daddy Had Listened __Do Read My Above Poem Elzabeth Smart!
TRASK
Chrissie
Jack
Love from India - Joel -
~E
"Mama.
Thanks for listening. I have to go
Its cold and its starting to snow
I place these roses on your grave
Minus one tear stained petal I want to save... "
This one Deeply touched me
Peg
by this lovely tribute...
Know that kind of grief, too...