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Where Only Fools Would Tread
by Annabel Sheila → (All Poetry by Annabel Sheila)
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There's a hiking trail (now closed due to treacherously deteriorated footpaths) in Fundy National Park, New Brunswick, called the Devil's Half Acre. Many years ago, in my youth, I visited there and the eerie feelings I got in that strange place have stayed with me all my life.....


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Shrouded in mystery, not for the weak of heart
The jagged cliffs dark and damp, feral mosses
Cling to ragged stones along the perilous trail
Where only fools would tread!
 
A cold eerie mist devours the daylight,
Leaving all-consuming darkness in its wake.
Rhythmic thunder echoes into the trees…
The turbulent sea pounding the rocks below!
 
There’s a footbridge near the cliff’s edge
Where spine-chilling whispers pierce the silence.
There he waits, in the shadows below the bridge,
Gnarled fingers clinging to the rotting timbers!
 
No one ventures there anymore.
Deemed unsafe, they closed it down.
Too many had tried, and too many had died,
Lost in the treacherous crevices within.
 
But now and then the very young drop by,
An adrenalin rush, they do it on a dare!
For in the minds of the youthful
There’s nothing to fear but fear itself!
 
And he patiently anticipates their foolhardiness!
For this half-acre of the earth belongs to him!
Banished there by the righteous a century ago…
He vowed to seek revenge against them all!
 
There are naysayers that mock the stories!
And there are those who’ve been there and back.
But in the Devil’s Half-Acre some have vanished
Never to be seen again!
 
 

© Annabel Sheila


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 Reviews of "Where Only Fools Would Tread"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 20, 2012
WELL THAT'S ENOUGH FOR ME...YOU WON'T CATCH ME VENTURING ANYWHERE NEAR THERE(SMILE)!!!. ANNABEL, YOU GET BETTER AND BETTER...THANKS FOR SHARING THIS SPINE TINGLING WORK. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 1, 2012
ah, home sweet home! vivid write annabel. much enjoyed!
carolyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
You have recalled, recreated, and shared the special and eerie place very effectively through your verses here, Anna. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
A haunting, eerie tale! I may have ventured there in my youth, but looking at the beginning of "old age" these days, I simply enjoy hearing the story which you told so very well, wanting yet more.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
I guess I'm just an old fool; places like this one really intrigue me, and on my many travels I've often sought them out. I've also made my poor spouse stay in many a haunted hotel!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Yikes and wow! I'm glad to be in the warmth of my own house right now!
You do think of every nuance, clever Annabel!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Sounds like a place that I would not want to dwell. I am sure there is some truth to all of it, but the energy doesn't lie...Great story content, I couldn't stop reading your words.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Spooky story, well constructed and entertaining.

But in the Devil’s Half-Acre some have vanished
Never to be seen again!

But this.....pretty much describes downtown LA. Patrick

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
You paint a vivid picture of this devilish place. I can see why legends have come from it. It reminds me of Rock City near Cheat Gorge. One time I got loose shale and almost slipped into the gorge. A friend pulled me up with a rope I had tied around my waist.

Another time I was with a deer hunter in a tree stand. I took shelter from the wind in a log shelter for that purpose. As the mist moved over the mountain at dusk,, I felt like I was being transported back to the time when only Native Americans hunted this mountain. A very eerie feeling.

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
A fantastic story of mystery and a bit scary. There is a place
here in Pa. named Ricketts Glenn. In youth group we had
adventures down the glen. Mossy rocks the paths. Pools of water
from streaming water falls. Beautiful but yet a mysterious
aura abounds. It is still open today but walk down the glenn
at your own risk. Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Scary, scary story, Anna, my far northern friend. Yes, this does sound like a place only the very foolish or the very young... and foolish would tread.
Your friend, Mark

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Oh my, this gave me goose-bumps as this was absolutely a terrific write full of fright ,Wow ,chilling tale indeed Laura

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Glad I read this one in the bright sunlight, but I can envision it as a good one to tell around a secluded camp fire at an early teens summer camp.... Well done Anna Dick

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Ooooh! Scary, well-constructed piece of writing, and I LOVE your halloed picture. Funtastic!


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