OH, this is good!! Form, content, rhythm. . ."all of above and below"
and m o r e. Encore! ENCORE!! 'Pea' <3 ~~ Hope it's okay to share this. I have a Jewish friend who is an excellent poet. This poem reminds me of her.
Oh my, only you can do this. It's too many things for me to capture in a short space. I do love it and relate to so much it. I wanted to say that I miss you, call me anytime. I wish you every success in California. You're brilliant, you'll make it, I promise.
Love, Janet xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
lol, enjoyed this greatly - spread your wings
and fly (or float) , but most of all, enjoy!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2002
Yes,I enjoyed it. Especially Mom's greeting at the door with the shower deal. Bill
Reviewed by Valerie Steiner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2002
Well done! My fave line- "when I visit Mom
greets me at the door with do
I want to shower?" - makes me laugh - reminds me of my Mom
and m o r e. Encore! ENCORE!! 'Pea' <3 ~~ Hope it's okay to share this. I have a Jewish friend who is an excellent poet. This poem reminds me of her.
Cheers
Alain
Love, Janet xoxoxoxo
and fly (or float) , but most of all, enjoy!
greets me at the door with do
I want to shower?" - makes me laugh - reminds me of my Mom
Poignant? assuredly.
Well done