Thunder on the Lake (poem) by Lisa Hilbers on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 5, 2005

Great imagery! You could be (and perhaps you already are) a successful songwriter, if you wanted to, besides being a poet.--Joe :-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 10, 2005

You paint a peaceful scene where the false violence of a dying storm heightens awareness of the pending night. Lovely.

Ron

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

Beautiful imagery Lisa! So serene! Well done!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Time for a cup of coffee and settle back and enjoy the world you created I feel calmer already and at such peace
Thank you

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Just stunning, Lisa!!! What vivid pictures you conjured for we readers! Beautiful!

Peace.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

A very idyllic and serene mood captured here Lisa
God takes care of all our needs
Peter

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

As always, awesome work!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Lisa,

What a goegeous poem and photo combination!

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

vivid, enchanting and so alive ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Your images paint pictures upon the canvas of my soul, Lisa. Your verses transported me to that delightful place by the lake; I imagined warm kisses beneath the misty moonlight and could hear the sun beckon the sky to roll out it's diamond studded indigo velvet that the creatuers of the earth might enjoy sweet slumber. I guess what I am trying to say is that this is really excellent, Lisa.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Lisa this is an enchanting write, with such superb imagery!
Good to see you;-)

Love,
etw

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Put me there on that lake with you, this was THAT enthralling...Ed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Wonderful write Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Lovely write... the beauty of a storm... and the peace we find with it.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

awesome write, lisa; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Lisa,

It's fixing to thunder here--you capture the magnificent power of the storm vividly and beautifully! This is among your best, definately a keeper--thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

This is outstanding Lisa, a classic, and calls to me to remember how wonderful those summer nights can be. I've missed your words dear friend but this was worth waiting for.

Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Wonderful imagery in this delightful poem especially "The old man in the moon; turned on his light-for all his night time guests" Splendid pic

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Well! Hell, Lisa, you have gone and made me misty-eyed with this hodgepodge collection of the goings on on and about the lake. You captured the essense so well I could almpost hear those darn frogs hah-rumping.