Commando Bride (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2004

OMG! Sherry! Wasn't there a song lyric that said "Just gimme some kinda sign, Girl, Oh my Darling, That tells me that your mine, Girl"? Although these lyrics may be taking the advice a little too strongly! Terrific write Sherry!

After a few sips of customary champagne, the groom probably would have thought he was doing quite well and already ahead of schedule! I think everyone of us who has had the fortune or misfortune as the case to be married has experienced a humorous glitch or two we'd like to forget about. *smile*

Take Care, Chuckie

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

Aw, she'll forgive you! My best buddy forgave my wedding party when we snapped a picture of her on the potty during our bachelorette weekend! (and showed it to EVERYONE) It's the stuff that makes the wedding day memorable. Ask most brides and they will tell you that their special day is a blur, after spending tens of thousands of dollars on all the hoopla and gowns. She'll NEVER forget the panties poem, or not wearing any when she said "I Do!" This is adorable! Michelle

Reviewed by Cheryl Kaye Tardif

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

This is absolutely halarious!!! OMG!
Well, your friend will never forget this now....and
"though the entire world doesn't know yet"...
there's an author in Edmonton, Alberta, Canada who certainly knows!!!! hehe
Thank you for sharing...

I can't wait to have coffee with MY best friend...
and share this story! :)LOL ;)

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

got pics?

nice write :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

I appreciate your sense of humor. Thank you for this offering, Sherry. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

Very enjoyable read, Sherry - an outstanding piece!

Robert

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

Your right, she'll kill you, but she will be laughing the whole time. Great write and thanks for the sharing.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

Have you any idea how absolutely hilarious this is? Sherry, perhaps she will 'kill you' for posting this, but I think you've given her something brides everywhere hope for: an unequaled, unplanned, never ending memory that will bring a grin long into the future. I predict she will thank you! The poetry itself is simply flawless rhyme and meter... and you've proven, once again, that inspiration for grand verse can come from ANYWHERE! (grin) As a fellow humorist, this is damned great stuff! You're friend is very lucky.. katy xox.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

lol! at least she let it all hang out ;)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

LOL I LOVE this, at least they didn't have to waste any time!!!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

lol wonderful write! broguht a smile to my face!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

LOL! THANK YOU for sharing this with us Sherry!

Awwwww she'll luv ya for it I bet...haha......Great fun TY again, Dani

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

This is tooooo funny. An excellent write. I hope your friend enjoys this one for years to come.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Sherry, this was the funniest thing I�ve read in quite some time. Exceptionally well-crafted pleasing piece of hilarious poetry, Poet. That must have been one heck of a wedding�lol.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

I don't know about it being beautiful like Abdi-Noor, but I do know it is the funniest thing I've read in at least a month. You need to post what hospital you will be in so after your used-to-be-best-friend gets through with you, we can send flowers.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 26, 2004

What a beautiful poem. These verses I copied below will always remain the bride's memory. Thanks Sherry
A tale you will never, ever, forget
Though the entire world doesn�t know yet
But once this poem for you I've penned
The teasing you�ll get will be without end

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Sherry this is a scream...you naughty friend, a mischief maker are you? hahaha hope she gets a good laugh out of it.Very good memento for her wedding album!;-)

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Poor baby...lol...

Your words will be treasured I'm sure. ;o)

D a n a M a t t h e w s

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Very naughty and saucy Sherry

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

(((sherry)))

is the commando bride's name rambo? it will be when she gets wind of this one (and guess who the enemy will be LOL)

LOL--how embarrassing, but o, so funny

when i got married, i got married on crutches, and ripped the underarms out from my dress...on the hottest day of spring LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

thanks for the memory jog :)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

lol That's rich. Too funny!

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Dear Sherry,

What a laugh I had, thank goodness it's not me. But I am sure she will forgive you ..... in time (hee hee) :)
Very well penned, and thanks for sharing.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Hahahahahaha...what a naughty twited mind you have!!

Shame on You Sherry...but hell thanks for sharing this very delightful piece..Whaaaaaaahahahahahahahaha..to the Commando Bride...and whahahahahahaha...to the Wife...lol!!

Love Tinka