I tried and tried but just couldn't wrap myself around this format so I decided to amuse myself instead. I will only leave it for a bit just to show I tried and prove that I am not afraid of failure.
Not A Ghazal Kates Challenge
A worm met a caterpillar and wanted to date her So he built them a home in a big fat tamater
He wooed her and schmoozed her until she was his Then he invited her in to see his tamater
So impressed was she with his beautiful home That she agreed to remain with him at the tamater
So she gathered her things and moved in with the worm And set up housekeeping in his fine tamater
But soon she was bored with her too small abode So he built her a city all around their tamater
But fickle was she when the worm wasn’t looking She would stray to the vines beneath their tamater
She spied a caterpillar and she sure was intrigued They’d meet in private out of view from the tamater
She began to get crabby and she started to change Then attached herself to the wall of the tamater
The worm was heartbroken he thought she had died Never leaving her side, holed up in the tamater
Then one day a twitch did stir where she slept Then she emerged with wings and flew from the tamater
The worm was quite sad that his love flew away Then she came back and gave him a last chance tamater
A lovely story and a very lovely poem
I'm ot sure I will even try that strange format :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2005
I'm not sure about these Ghazel's but I know when I like what I read and I adore this write! Please show more of what you think you failed at because I suspect we have many more wonderful poems to read from you.
The Wholly Book of Doo-Doo-Rot-on-Me is adult satirical humor featuring adult language and adult content, and the work is a parody of the Old Testament Book of Deuteronomy.
Well done...still not sure what a "Ghazal" bazil-dazzle is......lol!!
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Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I'm ot sure I will even try that strange format :)