first visit here and glad I stopped by what a wonderful phrase and I agree with Peggy
"pen or sword it matters not
as the power within me grows
between love and hate..
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2002
How right you are! Pen is as powerful as the sword, if not more and the Pen seems to wield great power in your hands. Great write Keep writing!!!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2002
Linnie: some great alliteration in this: ..'here i stand stock still'.. great imagery.. you are so obviously readying to do battle! In such a short time you have grown so as a poet. Make those demons work FOR you.. a powerful and very personal write.. well done! katy.
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2002
brilliant write this, very strong and powerfull, take care of yourself...Mark...
Olive the Green Dream Train invites Danielle and Nina to come with her to plant special trees that can heal the atmosphere better than other trees can. A mysterious angel guides them, and the Dark Phantom tries to mess everything up again.
Laurie
"pen or sword it matters not
as the power within me grows
between love and hate..