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Lost Mind
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' . . . symbol of what had once been . . . '


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She stood in a field that was

covered with fog and morning dew

Didn't have anymore time to be

loved - the bird was there as a

symbol of what had once been

important in her life.

Dressed in satin black, she had

witnessed her own funeral from

a pier - secured her from falling

in; unlike walking the plank

What had died wasn't her body

but rather it was her mind.

Always thought of everything

that had to be discovered; woke

in the morning saying, "I hope

there's something new to find;"

Even searched for the time to

find a magical love.

Then one day, without knowing it

a dream stealer came into her life

"When I get finished, there'll never

be another thought she'll understand;"

"I'll stick around awhile and play a

game, one she'll be sure to join in."

"And once I take all of her memories

both old and new, I'll sell them to the

highest bidder;" Then there was a

bright white flash - he had done his

job, it was all over; put her mind in

an old mayonnaise jar.

As he tucked the jar inside his old

tattered jacket, at it she mindlessly

glanced; on the back written in aging

thread were the words, "Lost Hope;"

She had died a hundred years ago; was

a spirit trying to make it up to heaven!

'2008' RLS


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 Reviews of "Lost Mind"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
One of thee most powerful offerings from you Lance!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
Far too many Dream Stealers around; and what a powerful ending.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Wow, you capture all the enduring emotions well. How sad it is when one's mind is slowly decaying and for those around them, helpless...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
This writing captures the loosing of a mind in a very poetic way.
I wonder if this is how it feels to have Alzheimers?
Deep writing.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Oh Lance what a sad touching write. Everyone's fear of losing their mind and to think someone's going to come and put mine in a mayonaise jar, gives me the shivers. But I got news for that guy, he can't steal what isn't there. Fantastic write, Lance as always couldn't help but let you know what would happen if he came here. You're something my friend, have no idea where your poems are going to take me. Love and hugs, Bonnie


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