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The Severed Hand
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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'He got murderer in his eye'


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Accident - long hospital wait

Hand reattached, wrong one

Takes over, controls his mind

Here comes old killer, in the

mood . . .

 

He got murderer in his eye

He one serious unholy self

He got weapon in his hand

He gets to you - jams you

up . . .

 

Got to be good-looking

Goes after the pretty ones

When they least expect it

Come together - last breath

taken . . .

 

Fingerprints not belonging

Search the criminal database

Prints found - fit like glove

Doa by cops bullet, while

fleeing . . .

 

Hand removed for csi purpose

Sent to wrong wing in hospital

Serial killer of attractive women

New owner has it back-street doc

removed . . .

 

Attaches new one - looks okay

In the alley light, he’ is horrified

Mummified - goes around the neck

Gasps for air; morgue last stop

End . . .

 

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 Reviews of "The Severed Hand"
Reviewed on February 26, 2009
Hello Lance Robert,

Hospitals do make mistakes and how awful if this should happen to us!
Behind your eerie tales is a man with an engaging sense of humor, and it amazes me how you get away with it! (Like Dracula making jokes on Saturday Night Live!) Great write Lance!

Reviewed on February 20, 2009
and it can be done
I also read somewhere about DNA memories & such....so totally creepy
& spook'en!!! <---yeah not sure if that is an actual word :)
Cool Haunts!!!

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
Very creepy
Now I am looking at my hands after reading this!
NIGHTMARES A COMIN!

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Lance,
You have a gift for reading these haunting tales. Keep them coming, my friend.

Blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
I'm clapping both of my hands reading this one!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Deep and captivating tale,well done,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Geez, the imagination and creativity really on a roll...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Lance,
I must echo previous reviewers, this is chilling, nightmarish, ghoulish. Well done!
John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Chilling stuff, my friend. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
...you should be writing for horror movies,,,I lose alot of sleep over you btw..lol :)
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
BRRR!! If I have nightmares tonight, my friend....I'm blamin' YEW!! Oh, this is CREEPY!! Horrors!! Well done; bravo, Lance!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Wow!...if thy right hand offend thee...chop, chop. What a good laugh. thanks for this goolish story. Blessings, J'nia

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Lance,

Wow, this is really chilling. How such a mistake could end in death!
Seems so real, you have a knack for scaring the ....out of people!

Mary

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
I've heard of the frozen hand syndrome, where the hand has a life of its own ... yipe, this is chilling. If I have nightmares tonight, I'm blamin' yew!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
What a chilling story this is!!! Lance, you're the master of horrors. Very honestly...your stories should be sold for creating short films like the Twilight Zone, or perhaps you could name your new book, "Lance's House of Horrors"!!!

Sandie Angel :o)


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