Never sit in you chair for over ten hours It will make your poor back feel like the twin towers.
When seduced by my writing To spend much more time, My back reminds me that Sitting too long is a dastardly crime
It twists my poor spine Way out of shape And leads me to wearing Either corsets or tape
Now, I set an alarm clock As a gentle reminder So my poor back won't feel Like its in a meat grinder.
(c) 2004 Henry Lefevre
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Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
apparantley they say, you must never sit down for more than ten minutes at a time...whoever they are......
I can sympathise with you on this one, I had a twinge that never went away...that is until I started doing exercise.......yes that dirty word.
Funny write, thanks.
as one who also suffers with back pain, i felt this one
hope you feel better--
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
Henry do we not get lost in our work...
can you imagine I even do art on here..
I have yielded to the pain patches...
they work...or making sure to get up and
walk around...the timer is a good idea..
So I guess you know I loved this poem..
thanks..enjoyed it..floria
OW! Felt the pain in this write; hope your poor aching back feels better soon! How well I know that monster called back pain...NOT fun! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn (who knows what it's like!). Funny write about a not so humorous situation...poor baby....
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I can sympathise with you on this one, I had a twinge that never went away...that is until I started doing exercise.......yes that dirty word.
Funny write, thanks.
you're a gentle fellow
hope your feet are on track
so your spine won't turn to jello!
as one who also suffers with back pain, i felt this one
hope you feel better--
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
can you imagine I even do art on here..
I have yielded to the pain patches...
they work...or making sure to get up and
walk around...the timer is a good idea..
So I guess you know I loved this poem..
thanks..enjoyed it..floria
Best regards,
Leland
for over ten hours
It will make your poor back
feel like the twin towers."
To say nothing of your fanny.
Love it, Henry. [smiles]