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Silence In The Garden
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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Listen
To the Sound of Silence,
The leaves that fall like thunder to the ground,
Echoing in the forest like raindrops
falling on the roof-
Listen,
and tell me what you hear...

In the silence,
I hear the leaves turning brown,
Groaning in pain,
Seeking that final release,
As they fall trembling to the ground.

Listen,
And tell me if you hear the Stone Statue
Aging in the center of the Garden.

Do you hear the mortar cracking like
lightning in the sky?

Paint fading and peeling like fingernails
on a chalkboard...
Screaming into the night,
Revealing the powdery dust once hidden inside...

Can you hear and watch
As the limbs lower each year,
Creaking like an old screen door.

Hear the shattering explosion as they fall
Crashing to the earth,
And crumble into ashes and dust-
The particles blowing into the breeze
Crackling like static...

And now listen,
and truly hear;
Nothing...

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 Reviews of "Silence In The Garden"
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Time goes by so silently that we rarely notice what's happening in the garden. Perhaps we all should linger there more often. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Rein--how's my favorite poet? You never cease to amaze me. Your writing is increadible as words are assembled together to create such a masterpiece. Give me some skills--please. LC

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
silence, no distractions...Excellent work

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
So profound and strong! Great write!
Jill

Reviewed on March 8, 2003
A truly beautiful write.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
This is such a beautiful write...

I love the sound of
silence...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
this is beautiful Reindeer


William

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
I agree with Cathy
=======================
Have a great quiet day?

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
"in silence there is power"... very good imagery andstyle...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Ah, Retta, this piece resounds silently into my soul, love it! :)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Reindeer, this is eloquent in both simplicity and imagery. Well done.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Vivid imagery and wonderful expression...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
And silence does have a sound, doesn't it. This is beautifully done, Reindeer.

~E

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Very nice, like the imagery.

Nancy

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Retta, this is very profound. I like the sounds of your silence. Much better than where I am at; sirens, buses, drunks. You get the picture.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Powerful write!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Hi Retta, Your poetry is reality to me. Every piece I have read that you authored, has made feel as I am there in the forest. I love your writing!!

ty
tony

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Retta,

i love this one and the sounds of silence.
"And now listen,
and truly hear;
Nothing... "
Peg

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
a hero song
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