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Finding Peace In My Dreams...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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I Dream -Walked last night,
Found my way back into my forest,
And they welcomed me,
My lovely trees,
Said I had been gone
Much too long...

I had a friend with me,
He trotted at my side,
Laying his head on my breast
When we stopped to rest...
Looking up at me,
With his yellow eyes,
Smiling...

I watched the eagle fly
Heard his hunting cry,
And felt at peace,
Did not need to feel
That dark release
I seem to need so much,
To help me stay,
And not run away.

The forest was clear today,
So damn green and full of life,
Even the air seemed to breath,
The sky so blue,
And I felt you,
Here with me,
Though I could not see
Where you stood,
I felt your presence
In my woods...

I heard them then,
My lovely leaves,
Whispering and telling me things,
Like the tiny shadows,
They cast on the ground,
And I realized I had found,
My way once again,
All it took was to remember
You my friend...

How much that darkness calls to me…
Blinding my eyes so I can’t see,
The hand you keep holding out there,
Telling me to grasp it,
If I dare...

I do not think you know
How hard it is for me to show,
The caring and trust you need from me,
Wish I could listen to my lovely trees,
When they say in the gentle breeze;

“Woman, you must one day be free
Forget the tragedy you know,
And let yourself be shown
A better way to be…
Then you will be as free,
And as lovely,
As we…”

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 Reviews of "Finding Peace In My Dreams..."
Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
i like how this started out as a dream-walk, but the further you read you forgot you were within a dream ... therein was the true freedom ... it so reminded me of how we dream that we are running or flying or whatever, and upon awakening you have the vague sense of having done same ...and then the real task, getting up, clinging to that vague dream sense and trying to achieve the same goals in life. lovely piece. thank you. -a

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
An excellent write

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Your fist stanza is sooooooooo beautiful....and the rest is just as lovely...Very poetic....and one to remember....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
This was soooo peaceful and full of truth. Great write. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
So felt forget the tragedy you know and let your self be shown what power in those words
Lovely write

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Beautiful romantic images.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
"...I watched the eagle fly
Heard his hunting cry,
And felt at peace,
Did not need to feel
That dark release
I seem to need so much,
To help me stay,
And not run away...."

Beautiful words.

~E

Reviewed by the pahntom pheonix
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
this was so romantic of course you know i the rotten apple i see things different but this was sweet and romantic awesome job on thsi

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Gripping and excellent imagery

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Loved it, Freedom is first felt in a dream.

Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Sounds like I am really missing something, by not remembering my dreams. An excellent write. Trish.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Hi Retta, Your beautiful writing has again captured the peace and solitude of the forest. Loved this!

ty
tony

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
...only if we could all 'Dream-walk' like you.
Beautiful piece, and the last stanza's a killer.
-James

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
This is wonderful write with lovely imagery and powerful verses....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
The new day always brings new promise. I can always find that promise in the cherished words you write. Thank you. Wonderfully written.
Jill

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Retta,
This is haunting , dreaminy, enchanting the imagery of verses and the feeling here.
"How much that darkness calls to me…
Blinding my eyes so I can’t see,
The hand you keep holding out there,
Telling me to grasp it,
If I dare... "
Love this one Peg


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