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In My Dream...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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At night,
When I lay me down,
To sleep,
Perchance to dream,
I see you,
Your sweet face,
Your eyes which
Haunt me still,
Gazing at me,
With such understanding,
Daring not to touch,
Least I flee the burn
Of that flame,
This resides so deep
Within your soul,
Baby,
How will you ever know,
Such a love as mine,
When the time of loving
Is over,
And what remains
Is the chore,
Of letting you go…

Ah,
But in my dreams,
What we have is real,
Your love warming
The ice from my heart,
And your brave spirit,
Fighting the battle,
To keep me alive…

By day I am another,
Not the same,
Am somebody’s mother,
Answer by another name,
And feel no shame,
For I love someone dear,
Who eases my fear,
That I shall walk the earth,
And never give birth,
To a love such as this again,
In my dreams,
I let you in,
Hold you so close,
You could be my ghost,
Walk in my ancient lands,
Holding the hand of the man,
I once loved,
With eyes that rivaled,
The sky above,
Hair the color of wild wheat,
A love it was fate to meet,
A love that makes me scream,
When I wake in the morning,
And find he was only a dream…



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 Reviews of "In My Dream..."
Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
oh, amen, Gorgeous, magical, yet ever so real and oh, all too human poem, beautifully done, yes+++++
(((retta)))
m.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Reindeer,
Another beautiful piece to take my breath away. A wonderful piece.
Chrissie

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
this was so romantic but so sad that it was just but a dream awesoem job on this fatnastic poem

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Reindeer, you have done it again, beauty, grace, passion and reality all in one piece. It is the curse of the poet that dreams are not our reality, and our reality are not our dreams. Sleep well, poet, for your words have done their job. They have blessed those who read them.

Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Great poetry. Nice timing and voice.

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Rein--this was beautifully done! I love dreams because the soothe my soul like the rain. You are blessed with the art of writing my friend.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Retta, great poetry. Sometimes dreams do come true.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
This is excellent poetry...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Only a dream Retta? Then a very beautiful dream that needs to come true for you. I enjoyed this poem so much from you. What a brilliant writer you are. Bill

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
"A love it was fate to meet,
A love that makes me scream,
When I wake in the morning,
And find he was only a dream…"

Only a dream ohh so many dreams.. I love it, wonderful poem

Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
This is sooo god!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
no matter the topic, all of your poetry is wonderful...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Beautifully done, as usual.
Agree with every comment.

~E

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Ah, such longing, such love, such beauty. Excellent poem. I hope the dream becomes reality some day.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Such lovely poetry!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Dear Retta, THis was Prime poetry.

ty
tony

Reviewed by Jason Wise
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
"But in my dreams,
What we have is real,"

beautiful poem. loved the wording.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Pretty write Reindeer, very nice!
Jack

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Dreams do come true :-) Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
What a dream! Haunting beauty of a write...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Retta,
aahhhhhhhh
"By day I am another,
Not the same,
Am somebody’s mother,
Answer by another name,
And feel no shame,
For I love someone dear,
Who eases my fear,
That I shall walk the earth,
And never give birth,
To a love such as this again,
In my dreams,
I let you in,
Hold you so close"
Georgeous poetry.
peg


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