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Don't Whisper Love To Me...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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Each page turned reveals a part of me,
I'd prefer others never see.
Yet,
My tongue is weak,
And I could never speak
Of that which carved my heart from stone,
Thus,
I'd rather be alone,
Than surrounded by all those
Who whisper love to me,
And feel their need began to shove me
From my weak perch on life-
I don't even know why I stay,
Or write these pathetic lines
Others were never meant to see...

Maybe I wanted to believe,
That someone could come to know,
And truly love,
Someone like me...

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 Reviews of "Don't Whisper Love To Me..."
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Easy to see from all the responses that you are dearly loved by all your friends here.
~Joseph

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Superb, but sad......

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Being alone is so lonely. Don't go that route, little lady.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
a very heartfelt write Reindeer

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
I TRULY LOVE this EXCELLENT piece of written WISDOM, it has REAL PASSION, and I KNOW it came from YOUR TRUE HEART!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
profound write...great write......soulful write.

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Aww Reindeer this is so very touching
You are very gifted

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
I like you for you are a fantastic poet and a very nice person I like you alot as afriend but this was a gret sad poem also nice job on it

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Seems as if you're opening your secret diary to us. Excellent

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Not at all pathetic Retta..heartfelt is more like it..Floria

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
I love my aloneness....but it gets lonely...this is so nice and very deeplt felt~ Great job. Teresa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Insightful. Meloncholy day.

~E

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Retta, You always bless us with the innermost depths in your heart. Your poetry is a joy to read, always and this poem is no exception. Keep up the great work.
God Bless.......
Jill

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
This is profound write...great write!!!!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Raindeer, your work is always beautiful, it is the sign of a gracious and giving heart. Some are meant to be loved by one, but you, my poet friend, are loved by many, and will one day be loved by the world for your words of beauty, wit and love.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
I am sure there are many people who love you. You are very talented.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Touches my heart and soul--and reveals a vulnerability that we all share...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
This is so deeply touching, we write to live! You are gifted Retta.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Dear Retta, Your writing is as great as ever. I find it hard to understand why love has evaded you. You just have not met the proper person who will cherish you. Fools they are! I can relate to your current poem, especially since becoming an old fart...LOL

God Bless You Retta


Tony:)


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