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Walking The Line...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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You walk the line,
In that far away place,
And I know you’re just trying,
To keep us safe…
But
The bullets are flying,
And it’s such a disgrace,
To say out loud,
How much I miss seeing,
Your beautiful face.
So I smile through the tears,
And try to be brave,
Hiding my fears,
Of you being in that place…

But I miss you baby,
And I want you home,
I didn’t marry you,
To be alone…
But when I see you,
In your dress blues,
The pride I feel,
Lifts my gloom,
And I love you so much,
That though we don’t touch,
I feel your kisses
Each night before I sleep,
And try to keep
The memory of your love,
Where it can’t be touched…

I keep it safe,
Here in my heart,
And dream of the time,
When we won’t be apart…
So walk the line baby,
And do your job well,
Just remember who’s waiting,
For you when you return from that hell-

As you guard our land,
I’ll guard our love,
Keeping it safe,
From the pain and fear,
Guarding against the flow of tears,
Waiting for you baby,
To come back here…

Hoping our love,
Will keep you safe,
As you walk the line,
In that far away place…


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 Reviews of "Walking The Line..."
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
your love will keep him safe...we will pray for that
love

tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
A WELL WRITTEN LOVE POEM
BEAUTIFUL


Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Your love will surround him and is the best gift you can send. My prayers are with you.
~Joseph

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
A wonderful poem. Yes your love will keep him safe.

God, why should this happens to such nice people?

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
this was a beautiful poem nice job on it

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
This is a beautiful poem, I've been in that place and understand these feelings well.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
touching write...very very heart felt...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Dear Retta, I pray for your loved one?s safe return. Dress Blues, Navy, or Marines?


God Bless You and your Loved ones.


tony

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Retta, excellent piece.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Retta,
This is excellent
Beautiful and so tearful....
Love Peg

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
I hope he's home soon too, him and all the others. Such a sweet tribute to all the armed forces. Send it into Stars and Stripes the army newspaper.

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
A fine tribute.
I've been reading some real crap today.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
wonderful write Retta

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Fantastic Rhetta! Just what our military need to hear support and love from those left behind! Bravo!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
hope that line is strong and short...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Nice...
~E

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Heart touching write.

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
We pray for a safe and peaceful end Retta.


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