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What Oak Tree?
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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* This was a response to a challenge, to write a poem about a dog, a boy, and an oak tree...*





The Oak Tree stood between the shading Pines,
Grown for lumber on the mountain side.
How many times we played there!
Used it to hide,
Or just simply sat in its mighty limbs,
Staring down into the valley below...

I loved that tree when I was young,
Before what happened was done-
Damn brother reached up to touch the sky,
Fell with a horrible cry!

It was the dog who tried to save him,
Tried to drag us to our little Jim,
Yapping and growling, even tried to bite-
God, you should have heard my brother
Call to him when we finally came into sight!

Damn, he had so many broken bones,
It was hard to look at him,
But I could not leave him alone,
Held his hand, while he moaned...

They finally made us back away,
The sun moved behind the clouds,
Signaling the end of the day,
We were all thinking he would be okay-

Then that damn dog sat down and howled...

I felt a shiver run down my spine,
Screaming out; 'No!
You can't take him!
He's mine! '

But Gods never listen,
They are just so filthy and fowl,
Taking a little boy like that,
And the dog just continued to howl...

They took him to prepare for burial,
And we brothers and sisters stared at that tree-
With hate and loathing finally set free,
As one we begin to break its limbs,
Brother fetched his axe,
Sister the long saw,
F***ing tree wasn't so tall-

We gathered around as dawn finally came,
Lighting the prye as the sun rose,
Sending our brother off to drift in the wind,
Our gift to him something we all chose...

The death of that which took his life,
Burned in the fire of retribution,
Oldest brother drew his knife,
Marking his sign to remember his father's son.

Nature lovers be damned,
What better death could be planned?
What can I say?
Fires must be fed,
And this is the way we injuns bury our dead...


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 Reviews of "What Oak Tree?"
Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
I had such an oaken brother in my childhood, and he fell, too. I grieved then, I grieve still. For many years, I kept his leaves and acorns in a box... treasures.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Justifiable Homicide I say. Great poem, and so sad, but the end justifies the "mean" in this one.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Retta FANTASTIC! love the way you wrote this!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Awesome! Awesome!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
EXCELLENT WRITE ABOUT NATURE, WITH SO MUCH IMAGERY, ENJOYED READING

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Dear Retta, Sad writing, but a telling, and caring write.


tony

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Wow.. this is a write to remember.. You have done an awesome job on this.. Story poetry.. filled with undertones of anger yet values.. Strange wonderful mixture here.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
this is a damned good write Retta

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
excellent slant on this tale... well done!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Retta,

100/100....this is my score for you...BHUWAN

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
fuck the tree...not only injuns feel that way! you put a memory into greatness here too!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
You sure did meet that challenge Retta..great work..Floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Retta,
This is so very good you made the challenge in my book but then again
your poetry always does in my book.
Imagery as usal feels the reader and touches.
Thank you
Peggy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
Great expression of anger in this poem. Good write.


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