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Darkness Falls
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Deep within these hollow woods,
Always hearing the echo of screams,
Remembering the stories told around the fire,
K eeping my knife unsheathed as I walk along-
Never straying from the path,
Ever seeking to return home quickly
Silver thread of the moon peeks over the mountain,
Scaring me into quickening my steps...

Falling shadows darken the gloom,
As I began to run,
Leaving behind the shadows that follow
Listening to my heart beat in my ears
Sun sinking rapidly and Darkness Falls...


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 Reviews of "Darkness Falls"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 23, 2003
~~~~~~shaking here~~~~~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
excellent write Reindeer,
scary too, a good place to stay out of, during darkness.

William

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Like that D
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Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Retta, I know the feeling. I remember when I was young and saw a scary movie at night, I would run all the way home. Loved your writing. Bill

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Top drawer poem..great stuff

Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Great descriptions Retta! Gives me the chill!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
you nailed this one!!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
4-21-03

But, . End Of That Tunnel (Darkness) Is a Light For You!

TRASK

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Wonderfully done. J.

Reviewed on April 21, 2003
*brrrr* a chilling write...wow. well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. *reminds me of those ghost stories you hear told around the campfire...thank God FOR the campfire!*

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Hi Retta, I just left the jungle. I think I will try your forest, I want to make friends with a Couger. And of course You.


Love yf
tony

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Such great talent you portray! I love to read your works,,Wonderful job on this one! Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Falling shadows darken the gloom,
As I began to run,
Leaving behind the shadows that follow
Listening to my heart beat in my ears
Sun sinking rapidly and Darkness Falls...

Well written!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed on April 21, 2003
good write, reindeer! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Beautiful write..!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
darkness in the forest...a nightmare for many, i think not for you tho'...knowledge is something altogether different. peace thoughts, poet.


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