Deep within these hollow woods,
Always hearing the echo of screams,
Remembering the stories told around the fire,
K eeping my knife unsheathed as I walk along-
Never straying from the path,
Ever seeking to return home quickly
Silver thread of the moon peeks over the mountain,
Scaring me into quickening my steps...
Falling shadows darken the gloom,
As I began to run,
Leaving behind the shadows that follow
Listening to my heart beat in my ears
Sun sinking rapidly and Darkness Falls...
*brrrr* a chilling write...wow. well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. *reminds me of those ghost stories you hear told around the campfire...thank God FOR the campfire!*
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Hi Retta, I just left the jungle. I think I will try your forest, I want to make friends with a Couger. And of course You.
Falling shadows darken the gloom,
As I began to run,
Leaving behind the shadows that follow
Listening to my heart beat in my ears
Sun sinking rapidly and Darkness Falls...
In the second book of the BetterWorld trilogy, Kiyoko and her friends continue to fight MediaCorp's schemes to control the world. But a team of ruthless mercenaries is after them, and is closing in fast.
scary too, a good place to stay out of, during darkness.
William
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Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
But, . End Of That Tunnel (Darkness) Is a Light For You!
TRASK
Love yf
tony
As I began to run,
Leaving behind the shadows that follow
Listening to my heart beat in my ears
Sun sinking rapidly and Darkness Falls...
Well written!!
Love
tinka