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Welcome Home
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Picture is an arial view of Mount Shasta courtesy of Tom Daniels, Who took it on his way home..




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Hear me calling you
Sweet child,
Calling you home,
Return to the sacred mountain
With your heart full of stones,
We shall find a way
To cast each one
Into the flowing river
By the shore of our sea,
Let mother earth return them
To where they should be…

Come home my child,
The world has bruised you too much,
There is sorrow etched on your sweet face
And pain in your stiff embrace-

Let us walk the paths of our youth,
And remember the truth
Taught to us by the elders here,
The world to which we were born
Has nothing to fear-

It is man, who is unkind,
The love you seek
You will never find,
For you are searching
In the wrong place-
I see the hurt he left you,
On your beautiful face..

Come back sweet child,
Let me braid flowers in your hair,
I will brush and braid it with such care,
And you may lay your head against my chest,
And tell your stories then rest…

Then we shall rise,
Like ghosts from the past,
And I will show you
What you left behind…

Perhaps you can find,
That, which you seek,
Here in our world of beauty and peace,
And the soft sounds of the forest
Will finally let you sleep…

When you rise in the early dawn,
You will hear the call of the hawk
On his morning hunt,
And the memory of the howl
Of the wolf in your dreams
Telling you what you need to hear…

The birds will sing you
The morning greeting,
And the squirrels and chipmunks
Will play at your feet...

When the sun begins
To climb over the mountain,
In its slow and heated way,
Its warmth will melt the frost,
In your soul and perhaps
You will hear his husky voice,
Welcoming you home…


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 Reviews of "Welcome Home"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
This is perfection!

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
wow i envey anyone that gets to go there the way you painted it with your pen was masterful.. truly excellent poem..
steve

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
What a wonderful poem and terrific photo. S.

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
(standing and clapping my hands!) It doesn't get any better than this....Outstanding!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Oh Reindeer,
Once again, you have
touched my heart...
Beautiful as always...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
6-16--03

You Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed on June 16, 2003
(((reindeer)))

oh, this one looses the soul...in words and picture

both are stunning

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
So very touching and beautiful....the most compelling thing I have read today! ty ty ty ty for this!!!
absolutely amazing!
pax
Anita : )

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
how lovely to be coming home at last. Sounds like a wonderful place.

Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Retta, this has deeply moved me this morning... tears...thank you for your words...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on June 16, 2003
superb writing, and the pic is aweseome! well done, reindeer! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Retta,

I always enjoy your work, this is no exception. Beautifully done!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Its time for me to go home. Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
very beautiful indeed!!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Reindeer,

You take us on a journey filled with beauty and peace.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
GM, Retta,
Excellent as always!


tony:)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Excellent write...very very beautiful indeed...BHUWAN

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Reindeer, this is
An absolute wonderful Write ...
Excellent

William

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Wonderful write Retta!

Jack

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Wonderful world of nature in this one
Beautiful picture......

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Excellent Write Retta ...
Real like you.

([Huggs])

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Oh so wonderfuly said....
the view is breath taking
Mister

Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
This is such a Beautiful Write!!! I really really loved it. Great Picture too!!

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Beautiful and poignant and bittersweet and making me long for a long trek up a mouintain trail with "big sky" vistas. Terrific poetry, Retta, just marvellous!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
"...Come back sweet child,
Let me braid flowers in your hair,
I will brush and braid it with such care,
And you may lay your head against my chest,
And tell your stories then rest…"

Every line a gem....

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
What a fantastic poem to match the picture bravo Reindeer!

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Oh wow, the picture is breathtaking your words just beautiful.

Nancy

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
This is sansational!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Retta,
I love this one it is so beautiful
{{smiles}}{}
Peggy


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