Girl On The Train... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Beautiful poetry with such deep yearning...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Reindeer,

You made this experience so real ... well done!

~Joseph

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Retta, this is a wonderful and emotive write.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Breathtaking work Reindeer. This was superb.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Retta, this is outstanding, and you have captured Sanil's style and grace so well. He should be honored, and I am impressed and awed.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Retta, expertly done.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

wow...this is very very beautiful write written with mixed emotions...clap clap clap...BHUWAN

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Beauty and its power, to be injoyed... is captivating...Wonderfull right..

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

I know exactly what this person felt like only I did speak my heart (to a guy)I don't know if it's easier to speak or walk away but at least you do have a slim chance if you try to make contact.
Great idea for a poem but then all yours are.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Fantastic write!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

right beside you on this one

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

You are a master writer Reindeer, you did this flawlessly~

Reviewed by Nate Ashton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Gulp! I think you wrote me right into this scenario. I watched, I violated.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

The elusiveness of a maybe-fate, aspired to, touched invardly and then, gone... the story of Life, Retta, sensitively done. :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Fantastic write!

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Wow! This is so very sensual. I can see the entire scene in my mind. Excellent Retta!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Interesting take on an old theme. Done it in my mind many times, ... like our guide on that Phillipine tour. I thought she could sense my thoughts, ... or at least my heart nearly pounding out of my chest.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

So nicely-written Retta!

Sandie Angel / May Lu :o)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

such butiful thoughts... question: why would he have felt he violated her? he celebrated her beauty...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Yes, well done.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Wow! This one is a gem! So happy you shared it.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

moving and sad write, reindeer; well done! (((HUGS))) :(

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

This is so.....WOW.... thanks Retta... it's a moving write...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Retta ... You did it so beautifully . Thanks for your support and care.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

(((reindeer)))

ohhhhhhh, this is so beautiful and sad

"i look away
ashamed
i need to tell her
i am sorry
for i have violated her
with the love in my heart
but she is gone
and i watched my chance at love
fade away"

WOW

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(