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An Evening With You: Storm Bride
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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* A Response To Sanil's Challenge*

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"An Evening With You..."



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An Evening With You: Storm Bride




The night is cold and dark,
It is raining outside,
But I am safe and warm inside
This softly lit room…

It thunders outside,
And the lightning flashes,
I go to the window,
And peer into the night…

Feeling the forces of nature fight,
Clashing in the eerie gloom,
And the lights flicker in the room…

I sense you then,
Standing behind me,
And you reach out to take me
In your arms,
Keep me safe from harm…

Come away from the window you say,
But I’d rather stay-
The storm and I,
We are one you see,
And its fury does not frighten me…

The energy striking the ground,
The wind making that howling sound,
Awakens something deep within,
And I am as I have always been…

Electric impulses traveling up my arms,
When you touch my skin,
You feel the sparks on me,
And I wonder if you can see,
The flame in my eyes…

I feel so wild and free,
I love you holding me,
Your eyes softly aglow,
And I know you feel it too,
The passion of the storm,
Is also in you…

Softly you kiss my lips,
And stare into my eyes,
And we both think back
To another night…

Once so long ago,
When we first met,
The storm brewed anew,
And our love grew…
From that first night,
Becoming something
We could never fight,
I knew then,
I belonged to you…

I feel your sweet face,
Feeling so safe in your embrace,
Loving the way you smell,
And I can tell,
You feel those memories too…

You called me your storm bride that night,
And I remember how we danced in the rain,
How I loved the raindrops
Dripping from your lips,

Could not help but reach up and kiss,
Those drops away,
How much I loved that day,
And now it is here again,

And you take me in your arms,
As we open the door,
And dance in the rain once more…

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 Reviews of "An Evening With You: Storm Bride"
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
I very electric write, really liked line
"Electric impulses traveling up my arms,
When you touch my skin,
You feel the sparks on me,
And I wonder if you can see,
The flame in my eyes… " very strong!!!

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
A lovely well writen piece, held together with lovely images, well done...Mark

Reviewed by g g (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Wow this is wonderful!
Makes me look forward to storms this week;)
hugs
Lady G.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Retta, this one is beautiful. Brings back memories .....
S

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
This is a powerful, beautiful, energetic, write. I love a good storm! Wonderful response to the challenge.

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
I have to admit, I don't know what it is about thunderstorms that brings out such passion in some women but I'm glad they do......smile Superb poem!

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Your work is truly artistic and passionate. You always know how to pour your passions on a page. Very excellent!

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Another beautiful poem Reindeer, you have a bottomless well of beauty in you. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
touching & beautifully written...the photo is perfect

Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Oh Retta:

This one is so great. There are so many great imageries and sound effect to this piece. You have met the challenge and more.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed on August 4, 2003
awesome write, reindeer; you shine on this one! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Exquisite, just perfection!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Reindeer,

I love storms and I really like this write ... it's a classic!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
a magnificent write..Floreann

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Beautiful!!!
*Marlene*

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Wonderful write Reindeer! I love storms!

Jack

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Perfecto!!

love
tinka

Reviewed by Linda Murray
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
I am lost for words. Such beauty and love. So beautifully done.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Stunning, Reindeer. Such passion and imagery.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Great write....superb!!!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
I read you being very happy, Rein. I am very happy for you. You deserve everything your beautiful heart desires! Kudos on this beautiful writing.


tony:)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Oh this is wonderful. I love to see lightening and hear thunder out on the ocean while I sit on the beach
this is just gorgeous

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
a beautiful write great imagery
enjoyed reading

William

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
I love the positive effect this very beautiful poem has, Retta. Great write.
Leland

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
This is beautiful I love it.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
This is really so beautiful. Retta thanks for your participation. This is really so nice and so wonderful .... Thanks for your keen interst in participation.


___ Huggs --- Sanilnath G

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
There is no other passion as great as being in the arms of someone you love during a terrific storm. NOTHING like it!
You've captured this beautifully.

Sigh!
Susan


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