Whispers In Your Heart (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

That is actually the worst thing that can happen. You want to hold him with all your love, but can feel how he is pulling back, out of your heart. That hurts. But there isn't much we can do against it
Beautiful and touching write.
Nico

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Now that's deep, but wonderfully written!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

the whispers of the heart, do so much, sometimes things we don't want to hear. peace

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Oh, how I know this feeling. Sometimes the doubt is much harder than knowing the truth. Wonderfully written!!!!

(((Retta)))

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Oh Reindeer, you've poured your heart out in this poem! Great write, as usual. You sure know how to paint feelings on paper with your words!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Excellent ...
LOVE IS THE BEAUTY OF HEART ...
YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL HEART ...
I RESPECT YOUR HEART A LOT ...
THE LOVED THE ROMANCE IN YOUR HEART ...
THE BEAUTY OF YOUR HEART ...
MAKE ME SAY I LOVE YOUR HEART ..
ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AND CUTE

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Excellent write
Love can fool us?
Have a great night....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

well written accout of the frustrations love can provide...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Ouch...I hear you, grrl.... Good write.
Jenni

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

It's Whispers In Your Ears Ya Gotta Watch Out For!

TRASK

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Very heartfelt, very well expressed.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Hauntingly beautiful and familiar. You have the ability to take a single thought and give it a lush life with unbounded energy.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Wonderful!

I feel the gentleness of the love, the broken heart, and then the whispers......in the wind ~ "Easing back into the night...."!!

Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

So sad and touching Reindeer....I am trapped in the beauty of your verses!

Justin

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

This one is very sad but moving write.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Retta , this is truly beautiful in a sad way. I can totally relate to this poem as I have been there! ~Z~

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

"But they are there,
And I am beginning
Not to care anymore,
Stepping back and closing the door"... A terrible, but inevitable, effect of whispers alienating... heartbeats. I have been there... **shivers**
Poignant, soulful, marvelous write, sweet Reindeer...
{{{{{{Hugs}}}}}}}
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

A sad well written piece
thanks for sharing

William

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Sad,beautiful and bittersweet! Roses for you!

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

"whispers in your heart" -- wonderful description. We so often waste time longing for a past love, not realizing that a better love is within our arms. Truly sad what we humans do to each other. Really good write.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Very soulful, Retta.

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

such yearning in this write, strong feelings.....

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Your poetry is always rich with passion and deeply profound. You have a tremendous talent of placing your heart in every line. Very excellent!

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

tenderly & softly rendered...

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

I can feel your heartbreat. So very sad, but so very well expressed. Bill
P.S. Remember me? We have two songs together.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

sad touching write Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

This is sadness so beautifully written Reindeer...floria

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Hi Retta,
Ouchhh...This was so
heartfelt...
Written so beautiful...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Retta this is a touching and beautiful write that I very much enjoyed. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Heart and soul touching write.

Reviewed by Michael Kersting

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Well done!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

A beautiful piece Reindeer. Soft and bittersweet.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

We sometimes allow our fears to overshadow reality and see
treachery where there isn't any. Sometimes. But most of the time the deceit centers around the eyes. Very good poem.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Sad, Retta, and haunting. Great write! :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Such bittersweet beauty in this poem Reindeer! A superb gem!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

This is so touching and sad..and so marvelously woven..Thanks for sharing this gem Rein!

Debashish

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Words of sadness Retta. When my confidence isn't what it should be, I try and focus on not that I wish I was first,,but the fact that he'll never want another and that I'll be the last he'll ever need. Great write. Lisa