Shadows Under The Moon (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Very mystical and artistic poetry. You truly grasp the heart and soul in your excellent poetry.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Retta, this is so mystic and lovely.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

If you and I were real,
I would call you to my dream,
And teach you the steps,
To my ancestors dance,

Exquisite!!! I am in awe my friend..ty
Vesna oxox

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Oh sweetie - this one just captures the heart of the readers. beautifully expresses, and it flowed so smoothly you could drown in it.. This really is one of your best sweetheart.

Love;
Melanie

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Lovely poem - full of mystery :0)

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Outstanding write Retta, one for my favorites.

Nancy

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Excellent write ... Nice work with Mind , Heart and Pen

I enjoyed reading it and also enjoyed the flow of the write.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Retta, this was my favorite of all your writes to date. This is just so special. Beautifully penned and presented. Loved it. Lisa

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Wondrous poem and presentation. Excellent.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

REindeer these are gorgeous thoughts ....and wonderful presentation..floria

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Reindeer,

You made me breathless with this amazing piece! One of my favourites of yours.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Romance of the Spirit with the ethereal touch of a dream or a shadow... but imbibing the soul deeply. He will never forget this kiss in a moonbeam... **soft sigh**
{{{{{{{{{Reindeer}}}}}}}}}}
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Ohh. I can almost hear the wolves howling their plaintive, historical wail in this poem. I'm not sure why except that your words bring out the mysterious wildness in my heart. Very well penned.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Awesome package Retta!!

I am speechless!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

Retta, this is one of the most mystical and thoroughly magical poems I have read in ages...there is an element of romance here that is old and univeresal.
Excellent job.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

Outstanding Retta! very well written and so beautiful...~Z~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

A fascinating premise and write. Enjoyed it very much.

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

WOW!!! Pure magic....
Jenni

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

i would love to dance under the moon forever... beautiful mystical poem that envelops the atmosphere it surrounds...