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Strong Enough For Love
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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I lay,
In the shadows of the day,
And wonder,
What will save me,
From the darkness in my soul,
Who believes in me enough to know?
That sometimes love is not enough ...

I wonder my love,
Is your heart so tough?
Can it withstand the storms
That brew inside of me,
Can you look past them and see
The truth about me?

The shadows cast their nets,
And the fierceness of my soul is met,
By dark and troubled dreams,
And I can't help but wonder,
What it all means ...

I am cast like a stone,
Upon the water and skip a few times,
Then sink,
Feeling so alone ...

And yet beneath the surface,
I see you peering down,
And though you can't swim,
You dive in to save me,
Some how you see,
This is not where I want to be!

Your arms wrap around me,
Pulling me up towards the light,
We break the surface and I hear,
You whisper in my ear,
“Live for me…live for me!
You can't leave me here,
It is my one and only fear,
To live without you ..."

And the love in your words,
Warm my soul,
Making me understand,
I have at last found a man
Who loves me-

Despite the darkness he sees,
He believes I can one day be free,
To walk in the light by his side,
Someone he can confide,
His hopes and dreams to,

Now I must turn around,
Lay my darkness down,
And show you,
How much I love you too ...

I wonder if this is something,
I can do,
Share my life with you,
Open my heart and let you in,
So our life together can begin ...

When you are near me,
My doubts all fly away,
For here is where,
I want to stay ...

So touch me baby,
Make me feel real,
Let me feel your love in every way,
Cast these shadows from my heart,

Let us start to live our lives,
In sweet and beautiful harmony,
In my forest of dark beauty,
Or your land of the burning sun,

What does it matter?
As long as you and I
Are together under,
The same beautiful sky ...

-- || --


© Reindeer Mckenzie 2003

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 Reviews of "Strong Enough For Love"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
No doubt about this Retta. He is the right one. Someone who brings out those emotions cannot be the wrong one.
Believe in your love and him.
S

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
Retta, this is beautifully done, and very touching. Good Job!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
very beautiful... a pleasure to read...

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
A beautiful write :0)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Simply beautiful, Retta!! :)

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
This is so beautiful!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Beautiful write...brava, my friend.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Another gem from you my friend...

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Words that give us hope, dear lady. Beautifully written.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Thanks for this beautiful posting ...

-- Wonderful Feeling .
-- Beautiful Thinking .
-- Excellent Writing .


Thanks for sharing ...
Wish you all happiness ...


Sanilnath G


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Retta you sucked me into this one completely...this is a keeper okay!!

Gee your feelings expressed are so very much like mine..its incredibly spooky!!

I am amazed!!

love Tinka


Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Retta,
Right here...
"And yet beneath the surface,
I see you peering down,
And though you can't swim,
You dive in to save me,
Some how you see,
This is not where I want to be!"
If he can see this, he is worth letting in!

This put me in a warm place this morning!TY!!

Hugs,
Maria


Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Ahhhh, Reindeer! What sweet words to have a "someone special" whisper in your ears: You whisper in my ear:
“Live for me…live for me!
You can't leave me here,
It is my one and only fear,
To live without you ..."

Very beautiful! Well done!


Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Beautiful, well expressed poem! ~Z~

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Every single thing about this is so perfect.
Wow.
Nothing I say could be good enough.
I'll just have to catch a tear and throw it at you.
John

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
My goodness, you can put the love write out here better than you know.
Love it! Beautiful picture. Thanks for stopping my way.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Beautiful tribute to love, my friend.
~Excellent write~~~!!!!!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
A very heart touching write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Beautifully expressed longing and hope for love to succeed even with all your doubts. Excellent write Reindeer!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
When you get started you turn out some beautiful stuff, but then you know that, huh? Very nice.


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