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Sister Wolf
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My Dear Friend wrote this poem to me, and I wanted to share it with you, along with my response.








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-- Field of Dreams [23-12-2003]



Come my dear friend
Let me take you away;
Into the fields of never ending dreams
Where the River of Peace runs
Through the Woods of Life...
Come, drink from it
Let it bring you the peace you need
Then, come and rest on the bed of clouds
That lies in the middle of weeping willows
And black roses,
...Let them take your pain away as you sweetly sleep...
...The wolf will watch over you in the night,
When you wake,
Your troubles shall be gone
And the memory of this place will stay with you forever...
Come, my dear friend
into the field of dreams
And the woods of life...


...My dear sister,
The wolf will watch over you while you sleep and dry your tears as you weep...


Sorry the poem isn't all that good but it's from my heart and I will always be here for you

Your Sister
Heather


My Response Poem To Heather

Sister Wolf


In the dark,
I have a friend,
Who stands by my side,
We run in the world together,
Seeking a path to some end…

Neither of us knows why,
Or where it will end,
But still we try…

Someone called us once;
“The Sisters Grim…”
And we laughed at them,
If they only knew…

We share the same scars,
My Sister Wolf and I,
We both try to find a reason to live,
When all we really want to do is,
Die…

We keep each other alive,
We have a pact you see,
Sometimes,
She teases me…
But I remind her softly;
“If you go,
I go…”

The Sister’s Grim,
They call us,
For our Dark Poetry,
But that’s not really true …

I am her Rainbow Colored Sand,
On the beach less ocean in her life,
And she is my Spirit sister,
The wolf spirit who keeps me alive…


By The Sisters Grim...Ha ha..

Reindeer and Heather


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 Reviews of "Sister Wolf"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
I could feel the friendship between you and your friend in this magnificent poem

Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
This is great! I love your words and I love Heather's...

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
A shoulder shared is lifes secret...Pride is false when we feel only ourselves..Love and pain shared Support life....You have a treasure in this as twin spirits...May the Sun and Moon guide you both through these times...May you live life together in dreams and in this world...michael

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
both are pretty fine to me
glad you have each other take care

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
This is so wonderful......

Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
This is a beautiful poem and tribute to a friendship that is ever lasting. When you find someone that close to your soul, it's hard not to write about them! Happiness and prosper in your relationship!!

-Andi

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
{{{Retta}}}
Both are wonderful, beautiful and very touching and inspirational!
Oh my friend so dear I shall miss you here!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

P.S. Congrats on the contest win my dear friend!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Glorious poetry..you both have "Light" hearts..ty for your presence upon this Earth...
PS Congratulations on winning the poetry contest...:)

Vesna oxoxo

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
Spectacular
Amor

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on December 25, 2003
Both poems are gorgeous expressions of a passion for a friendship and the ties that bind. Happiness to both "Sisters Grim".
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 25, 2003
Retta, The poems are both, wonderful, it is so nice to have a sister willing to write a poem for you, you are both blessed to have each other! Now lets get down to business, how are you going to send me that beautiful dream catcher? LOL! That is a most beautiful one, that would look good above my bed, so it can catch my dreams of running with the wolves and with my dog Rufuz...thanks for a wonderful posting...Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Wonderful friendships
Have A Very Special Holiday!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
The Sisters Grim are a wonderful team! Happy Holidays to you and yours, and to your Wolf Sister, Reindeer!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Beautiful poems both. My sincere best wishes to you. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
both poems are so beautiful
Happy Holidays
William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
a beautiful poem and a most effective reponse ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Most beautiful write Retta!!

Merry Christmas to you my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
What a thing of rare beauty is this. Happy Holidays Sweet, Gentle Lady.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Thanks for sharing this treasure with us.
Best wishes to you this holiday season.
John

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Excellent deer and congratulations on your winning poem

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Beautiful write the both of you! Congratulations Reindeer on your win! Well done!

Jack

Reviewed by Justareader Offinework (Reader)
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Lovely piece of writing!

Peace and Love
Tony

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on December 24, 2003
Kindred spirits are so important :0)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2003
Congratulations on your contest, just dropped in while trying to ingest a gallon of water, at least I hope it's water.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2003
Rein,
This is so beautiful both of them they have deep meaning..

Hugs

Happy Holidays

peg

Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
Reviewed on December 23, 2003
This is so beautiful!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 23, 2003
It sounds likt the Spirit brought you two together to watch over each other and that is something to be truly thankful for.Thanks for sharing these wonderful poems Reindeer!


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