This is actually very symbolic and yet not so entirely because it is also very real...
Lover Darkness
I have a lover Darkness Not new I simply know her Better now Darkness Wraps me in velvet cloaks Holds me to her bosom Drowns me In sweet scents Of silent sleep And sometimes sorrow She lets me weep She asks for nothing But gives me dreams Of golden luster A treasure trove Of rainbow hues And amber auras Thus I know My heaven with her She gives me time so Everything Is my love Darkness Makes my mistress Moon Jealous I love her My lover Darkness
My new favorite. You really should try to go professional.
Reviewed by S H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
Hmmm, are you going to keep getting betterand better as those words weave themselves into the future? I see poetry that will be read regis. I don't say that often!
This is excellent and so real, I love everything about it. youre not going to believe this, but just this afternoon I wrote something using so many of the words you used here. I'll post it soon
Moon, lover, auras, heaven, dreams
amazing!
A lover to many of us Regis, this is an exquisite write. The picture only punctuates the words that much more.....well chosen my friend. I love the sensuality within as well, it conjures up vivid images. Master craftsmanship once again.
Exquisite, Regis! A lovely, poetic verse! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Wow! This is one of my favorites of yours! The picture, the poem, all of it blends so well. I like the gothic touch to it, it shows you know the balance of dark and light is beautiful.
This is such a deceiving write on the surface. So enchanting and almost surreal...yet with just a tiny scratch below the surface it reads like so much sadness. To be alone in the dark with the thought of a distant lover...a dark dream lover. or i'm just full of it...lol...but that is how it reads to me. :)
If she is darkness then I am night,
I want to make it with her, just once alright?
I will pay you for this chance,
If you will let me, yes please grant...
An interesting, thought provoking, and titilating write, I can feel a tickle in my pants, I must not be dead afterall...LOL! Peace to you my Friend, Ed & Rufuz
This is soulful and longing as well as beautifully described and written, Regis. So many of us can relate this to our own life experiences in so many different ways, although "each to his/her own darkness and sense of being alone", I suppose. I have a poem called "Sad Loss Comes To Bed" (NB not "Dead Loss Comes To Bed"!!!) of which this poignant write reminds me. Thank you - you are not alone in your darkness, my friend... she is both master and mistress, sometimes!! Kate xx
symblic...yes...real...yes....I can relate, Regis...I have always been a night owl and feel quite comfortable in the quiet of the night...
Lovely imagery here and the soft sensual highlights are excellent.
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Moon, lover, auras, heaven, dreams
amazing!
Reindeer
Beautiful art work...great title...fantastic prose!
Robert
take care
Your elegance with words shines brightly in these lines...
and the artwork...whew!!!
how the moon is jealous at the end..great writing...floria
~Rose~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D
Paix et l'amour a toi, Regis!
Amor
Into them, may loves light creep.
Great peom.
Bessings,
Judith
Thank you for this one..
Love art perfect for this one....
Lady Peg
TRASK
Really interesting read
Tommy
ann
WELL PENNED
ENJOYED MUCH
WILLIAM
You penned a real gem here.
One question though, where
did you get that picture
of me...lol
Superbly done!!!
Trixie :)
multi-layered, emotional write you've penned here--very well done, exceptional
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
I want to make it with her, just once alright?
I will pay you for this chance,
If you will let me, yes please grant...
An interesting, thought provoking, and titilating write, I can feel a tickle in my pants, I must not be dead afterall...LOL! Peace to you my Friend, Ed & Rufuz
This one is so good. It reminds me of my own poem, "The Dark Lovers". The picture is so unique and well-done too. Lovely write indeed.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Stay strong and be wise...you still have true friends!!
Warm Love Tinka
Andrea
Carmen :-)
Utterly beautiful and bewitching!
Excellently penned!
Love, Sheila
God Bless
Michelle~
write to go with it!a touch of mystery in this one
very beguiling!
Lovely imagery here and the soft sensual highlights are excellent.