Some things can be powerfully symbolic and they leave an impression on one's soul. She actually did bring me cherries.
Cherries
One night
She brought me cherries
She left them on my doorstep
In the morning
The sun revealed them
Dew glistened like a myriad gems
Birds warbled somewhere nearby
A squirrel scampered by
A rabbit nibbled at the clover on the lawn
But no creature dared touch
The cherries
I looked in the bowl
Each cherry like a beating heart
Which one mine?
Which one hers?
I’m not much for eating
It took awhile
But when I bit into that first cherry
I knew there was no turning back
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Wow Regis,
Terrific symbolism, I happen to love cherries, I always buy organic cherries from the local farmer's market when they are in season. I freeze them and eat them for snacks throughtout the year. After reading your poem, I will have a new image in my mind from now on.
Ncole
I have a poem that delves into the (naughty) symbolism of cherries so you are so right.... I like how none dared to touch these cherries. The last verse makes them sound dangerous, like Eve taking the apple from the Tree~ Hugs:) Sheila
"I’m not much for eating
It took awhile"... interesting revelation.
Sweet and simple and lovely? Not that innocent, it seems.
(It took me a few second before I could look at this bright red... maybe it's my mac ;-)).
Ahhhhh, only you can make cherries a forbidden fruit :) ...
Sandy
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2006
I love the unique symolism here and the effective use of simile and metaphor:
"I looked in the bowl
Each cherry like a beating heart
Which one mine?
Which one hers?"
One taste and it was all over for you buddy! Well done!
~Butch
Wow that is one good cherry my friend and i hope you still have that cherry. I am too one good cherry and it feels so good to be one and appreciated for the first time in my life. I admire you for writing this and wish you all the best in your writing. as always.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2006
Ah, you do know how to titillate, my friend. Like your new photo, although it may not be new, just now noticed it.
Cherries Huh! Ok well I will try to think only one track here and just say that you described a sundae topping so well Yup nothing like a good cherrie on a nice mound of ice cream
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
A really 'visual' piece of work, Regis!
I enjoyed having it open up my morning for me. It sparkles with life.
One thing you might have forgotten to change, though:
"Dew glistened like a myriad gems..." (I would opt for leaving the "a" out, and just say 'myriad gems.' Hmmmm?
Regis;
whenever I think of talent and AD/ you are not far away!
I have often told you that I feel you are very gifted!
This latest only re-inforces that !
be blessed!
peace',
Rich Criso
"Cherries" by Regis (Reg) Auffray is delicious, uplifting poetry that feeds the soul and heart with lots of love, happiness and hidden feelings in-between. I think I'll have some of my favorites bittersweet chocolate covered cherries with a shot of port wine. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
You ate her heart. Better than breaking it I guess.
Brilliantly symbolic...
Now for cherry pie..
Tuck in my friend they sound sensually scrummy don't resist...symbollically superb Regis!
Reviewed by Robert Harrison (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
I am pleased to be tracking you Reg. At this posting I shall be at the top of the list, and a bloomin" long list it is. So here are my comments, ditto,ditto,ditto,ditto and so on to the end.
Nice piece Regis. Romantic and surreal at the same time. Thanx for sharing dear brother.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Ooooo.... here I am, slapbang in the heart of Tess of the D'Urberville country and all I can see right now are those luscious ruby moistly-parted lips quivering round red berries. This is spiritually tantalising and totally ELECTRIC!! Also makes me think pears from City of Angels... A heavenly feast is this with just one bite... Edenic with Perfection still intact... Bless you, LOL K xx
A deliciously sweet and original use of a classic image, made all the more powerful and irresistible for what is implied rather than directly stated.
Aberjhani
Bet you can't eat ONE! Beautiful poem. Those cherries could be symbolic of so many things. I suppose it is up to the reader to figure out for himself which one.
God Bless,
Lew
A bowl of temptation that apparently worked! This is a sweet and highly effective poem, and captured within its lines, at least for a while, is the old adage that "life is a bowl of cherries."
Who was it that said that we only have one bite at the cherry? Obviously someone who did turn back. Something of the MaCarthur's Park came to mind as I read this succinct piece: 'Someone left the cake out in the rain, I don't think that I can take it, For it took so long to bake it, And I'll never have that recipe again, Oh no'
Nice touch using red to create both mood and tone.
Lucious write and a beautiful one indeed. I thought of the first night I went out with my husband, I had known him all of my life...he actually lived across the road from me, and I went out with him as a kind of joke, and like you said...there was no turning back, the rest is history. Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Stunning....and hey what do they say about sharing???
Damn I would give anything for a ripe cherrie right this very moment....you tickled my taste buds my friend!!
Warm love TinkaSweets
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Reg, I adored this..Your so prolific in your writings, always bringing FRUIT of the Holy Spirit to your readers..I saw your new picture up there on your bio!! Your so cute, hehe..Have a glorious and wonderful day~~
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Thanks Regis!
Angela
Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.
All the best,
Lena
Much Love,
Margaret
the delicate essence of virginity
love's name calling you to tatse
Much Love & Cherries!
Vickie
Terrific symbolism, I happen to love cherries, I always buy organic cherries from the local farmer's market when they are in season. I freeze them and eat them for snacks throughtout the year. After reading your poem, I will have a new image in my mind from now on.
Ncole
I have a poem that delves into the (naughty) symbolism of cherries so you are so right.... I like how none dared to touch these cherries. The last verse makes them sound dangerous, like Eve taking the apple from the Tree~ Hugs:) Sheila
It took awhile"... interesting revelation.
Sweet and simple and lovely? Not that innocent, it seems.
(It took me a few second before I could look at this bright red... maybe it's my mac ;-)).
Interesting Reg!
Axilea
Sam
Sandy
"I looked in the bowl
Each cherry like a beating heart
Which one mine?
Which one hers?"
One taste and it was all over for you buddy! Well done!
~Butch
"Cherries"
Interesting symbolism.
Many ideas for cherries needless to say!
Now I cannot resist...goes great with whipped cream
they say!
Have a great one and take care these upcoming holidays,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Love and peace B&R
Micke
:)Ch'erie
I’m not much for eating
It took awhile
But when I bit into that first cherry
I knew there was no turning back
THIS stanza could be a poem all its own..
Vesna:)
Gina
I enjoyed having it open up my morning for me. It sparkles with life.
One thing you might have forgotten to change, though:
"Dew glistened like a myriad gems..." (I would opt for leaving the "a" out, and just say 'myriad gems.' Hmmmm?
Good write!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon
Best wishes to you and yours
from
kay
Reindeer
whenever I think of talent and AD/ you are not far away!
I have often told you that I feel you are very gifted!
This latest only re-inforces that !
be blessed!
peace',
Rich Criso
Brilliantly symbolic...
Now for cherry pie..
Chrissy
Love & Light,
Joseph
A vividly descriptive write.
Chanti
Sheila
Eileen
xo Taylor
Which one hers?
Nice piece Regis. Romantic and surreal at the same time. Thanx for sharing dear brother.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Sage
Aria
Take care,
Sherry
RM Green
Helen (((HUGS)))
Best wishes
Aberjhani
God Bless,
Lew
Cherries are one of my very favorite things to eat; you made me hungry with this one! YUM! Very well done, mon ami!
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
A sweet delightful treat here Regis.
Lisa
Delicious.
Susan
Whoa, this is high fructose, Brother! LOL
Love the cherry red font, too!
A truly delectable write...
Love&Hugs, Rhonda
TRASK
Nice touch using red to create both mood and tone.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
God Bless
Lena
Light & peace,
Joselyn
ann
But this a "Gem" Of a write
A Keeper I might Add
Thanks
Peace be with you
William
lol
very good Reg lol
EDL
Amen and Amen! And again I say Amen!
Love those cherries Regis, red, ripe, and sweet. I do enjoy how the animals respected your treasure too.
I do enjoy how you paint the representation of something abstract with something so concrete. Frodo and Gimli would have been proud.
Light and Wisdom to you dear friend and contemporary ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Susan
Damn I would give anything for a ripe cherrie right this very moment....you tickled my taste buds my friend!!
Warm love TinkaSweets
Love,
Dove
Love,
CJ
As my Mum was fond of saying " Life is a bowl of cherries "..." Just pick them "..
Brilliant, symbolic gem..
Peter
Brett
Rusty
Myrna
Fee