WOW, I must agree with the two who have reviewed before me Charlotte! This is some excellant raw and powerful expression here and those last lines a most befitting end! KUDOS HERE!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Powerful write ... Bravo!
~Joseph
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
This one cuts deep.
The last two lines are killers.
-James
~Nikki~
~Joseph
The last two lines are killers.
-James