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Black Kiss (revised)
by Bourge → (All Poetry by Bourge)
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Don't lay me here to waste in vain,
now all my skills lost in the game
I've cared too much and seen too much
to lay and rot on bloodstained dust.

Don't leave my eyes to fade away,
for what they've seen, they'd sooner say-
(by way of my lips frozen blue)
tell tales of what the gun did do.

Don't leave my blood without a cause,
just use it quick, don't dare to pause
that's the same mistake I made
and then they shot and down I laid.

With my blood paint out the stories
of the legends and the glories
but don't dare speak of death's black kiss,
that's a point they'd rather miss.

Adorn the sky with all my pride
although the scorn of spiteful tide
did wash away the medals won
so there's no proof of what I've done.

I have no proof of what I've done
I'm no-one now, and now I'm gone. 

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 Reviews of "Black Kiss (revised)"
Reviewed by Lawrance Lux
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
What Fate awaits all? lgl

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
WOW, I must agree with the two who have reviewed before me Charlotte! This is some excellant raw and powerful expression here and those last lines a most befitting end! KUDOS HERE!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Powerful write ... Bravo!

~Joseph

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
This one cuts deep.
The last two lines are killers.
-James


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