AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Scott Zachary, iJeff Ovall, iRochelle Brandon, iBetty Jo Tucker, iFrank Whyte, iTodd Cheney, iChristine Boyce, iLalita Vasu, iEmily Karlewicz, iMargaret Mullings, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Bonnie M Torrente

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· Messages
· 170 Titles
· 1,067 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Bonnie M Torrente, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



The Crystal Lotus
by Bonnie M Torrente → (All Poetry by Bonnie M Torrente)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

~   The Crystal Lotus   ~



Crystal Lotus on blue waters, afloat amongst fat Koi,
Sashaying to and fro, fade dark to light.
Golden silver shadows, swim beneath a Crystal Lotus,
From the brilliance of it’s shine… into their night.


Round, wet puckered mouths, reaching up to clear white skies,
Nibble on small insects floating there.
Lagoon of rainbow colors, swells of lazy puddle play,
Hypnotizing passing eyes to stare.


Lilly pads to shade soft scales, of swaying silken beauty,
Encircling slow motion in their joy.
Slumber in dark stillness, hidden deep into the pond,
Beneath the Crystal Lotus… rest the Koi…



COPYRIGHT©2005 BONNIE TORRENTE


 


 


 


 


 


 


authorsden

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "The Crystal Lotus"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
I was seeing this from the very first "fat" line, Bonnie; the imagery is so rich and yet the lines crystal clear and sharply tuned with high definition. Just love this as I find it a tantalising form when put with the lushness and fluidity of your subject. You are a master craftsman! A marvellous tranquility is painted through your words, together with a sensual appreciation and sense of wonder. A true word painting. Thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Very, very nice! Great piece!

Reviewed by John Hutchinson
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Very exquisite imagery my friend-well done!!!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
That's me Bonnie, just a fish beneath a crystal lotus. Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), youer little terrified sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Hey! Great stuff, Bonnie. Kinda like an exaggerated form of haiku. Gotta love it. Beautifully done.


New Poetry by Bonnie M Torrente
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Luxury of Solitude
  8.  Dream Just a Dream
  9.  Our Restless Minds
  10.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  11.  Sediment Within the Soul
  12.  In The Still of The Night
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  In Praise of Anonymity
  16.  Whisper Pens
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Pieces. . .The Abbeville Ltd Ed. (Out of Circulation) by Cynth'ya Reed

(Self-published. Please contact author directly to order.) Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into  
Member BookAds

Drifter's Logic by William haynes

a beat take on life, loss and the meaning of it all+  
Member BookAds

Key of Mist by Robin Ouzman Hislop

The Poems of Guadalupe Grande La llave de niebla (2003) Key of Mist Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop & Amparo Arrospide  
Member BookAds