I long to see him free... (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Sebring

Reviewed on October 31, 2017

L'homme solitaire marche seul.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on November 8, 2004

Thank you for a very good, thoughtful write, and for your welcome, too.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

An excellent profound write

William ....peace

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

Graphic image and verses unite to express a beautiful poetic song, Chanti. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

great poem and song Chanti. thanks for your review on my poem. I really felt some would take it negative a little. It's nice to have understanding on the stuff we write, especially when it is kind of controversal. l&p G

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Chanti,

At first, when the Jews were liberated from the concentration camps, they did not leave. They were so accustomed to being caged, that it was all they knew. They had forgotten how to live freely.

Keep trying to show him how. It probably hurts him knowing he could be free, but can't. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

The quill has blood on it. Very good!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

So very much said here that so many can relate too.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Chanti, all one can do is continue their understanding and love, and hope and pray that in time they will see more clearly.
Your affections will hopefully be found on the pathway.
Awesome write.

Lisa

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

It is with compassion that you reached - and it is with understanding that, one day, he will reflect and remember your embrace. (Wonderful graphics!)

Love,
Tami

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

hi glad i found you im in uk but spent two thirds of life abroad
many countries this is a fine piece of writing it reminds me of my
son & i could imagine that happening to him when he met his first
girl, if he had such good luck, for thats surely some girl saludos
robin

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Good poem, Chanti. Great graphics choice as well. All in all a tidy package. Well done.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

A truly deep heart felt pen. A poetic painting of ones mind

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Wow...wondeful wording and deep deep heartfelt description. Nicely done.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

it's very hard for others to accept our love when they have none to offer themselves ...

very moving and marvelously penned!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

I disagree with Peter...having some bit of knowledge who
you write of here.
Another great poem, Chanti...and the graphic is superb!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Tell him ...Chanti
Peter

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Wonderful expression. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

(((chanti)))

o, i've missed you--and your spectacular writes--welcome back!

poignantly penned, with power and emotion--

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

this is great, and maybe he did see the love that motivated you, or will someday

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

This is a perfect example of how our best intentions aen't always welcomed as best by others. A beautiful sad write Chanti!I hope you can come to terms with being turned away, I know how dificult that is
to deal with. Just remember that you know,your heart meant well.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

We all make our own boxes in life, and I guess all we can do is offer to help others when they need it, as you so compassionately did.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Great reflection of love!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

What a incredible poetic reflection of a beautiful and giving heart.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

I know one such as this and this write captures the sadness of such a spirit. Great write.