Katryn--Haiku is so difficult for me, but you do it splendidly. I'm gonna try one for you...
Succinct, descriptive
Katryn, Haiku master sure
Poetry defined.
(Okay, I'm the worst. I'll stick with novelty rhymes...) Nice job. Sandy
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Succinct, descriptive
Katryn, Haiku master sure
Poetry defined.
(Okay, I'm the worst. I'll stick with novelty rhymes...) Nice job. Sandy
*etched in polished glass*
Too repetitive with Ice title and ice in last line. Best I could think of but I don't like my alternative too much either.
well done! i needed this on this hot afternoon :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
refreshing! :)