Gawd damn twist again! Have you been taking lessons from me? You had me cuming right to the very end. If there is a cliffhanger, this is it. Kudos, Sandie!
"Play With Me" shows what "par excellence" writing means.
Long healthy creative life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Seth Mullins (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2005
Yes; the naughty muse has struck again. I commend you on the deft wordplay - and your guts for putting it out there. Frigid writers everywhere, take encouragement!
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
Hey..this is superb..to get inspired by a chewing gum? Incredible mind..
It will be difficult not to think about this every time I see someone chewing gum from now on. Vivid write my Sister, found your site while tracking Jerry Bolton's poems.
Ya got me. A chewy thought provoker--that ending is a zinger! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Ricardo Titang (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
hahahahah !!!! Sure got us all on this one foshur !!! All that anxiety and blood flow just for a "chewing gum" ? Definitely was worth itz while while it lasted ... but henceforth I wonder if "gum" will ever just be "gum".
What a let down, I was getting all hot and a cold shower was going to be my next thought, then you tell me your chewing gum...all you women are just tease's...LOL! ;) Ed & Rufuz
Homer's Ill Iliad & Odd Sea Odyssey (420 pages) is an adult satire/parody rewrite of the classic stories of the 10 year Trojan War and of the 10 year adventure of Odysseus trying to return home to his native Ithaca.
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"Play With Me" shows what "par excellence" writing means.
Long healthy creative life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Vesna*
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
Ya got me. A chewy thought provoker--that ending is a zinger! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Paul;-}
well done, sandy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D LOL
God Bless
Michelle!
respect, -A.